高三英语开放作文4专用课件.ppt

开放作文评分参考 文章扣题 内容充实 思维活跃 逻辑清晰 语言规范 写作思路 1、图画中的要素是什么？ （人、桌子、面条、叉子） 2、要素之间有何关系？ （他在做什么） 3、如何理解这幅图？ （把两只叉子当筷子用；模仿） 4、从中得到什么观点？ （选择正确工具和方法；不能盲目模仿） 篇章结构： 描图----解图----议图----圆图 可接受的观点 做事要用正确合适的方法（工具）。 不要盲目模仿别人。 复杂不都是好事，在某些情况下，简单是好的解决方法 。 随着环境的不同而改变思维和方法。 入乡随俗（不同国家有不同的文化，要了解和尊重外国习俗。） 中西文化虽然都很好，但是若结合不好，后果则会更糟。 不可接受的观点 多实践，努力坚持到最后就能成功。 做事注意力要集中。 光学知识不行，还要学会运用。 父母太溺爱孩子，以至于孩子生活不能自理。 要学会独立。 加强中西文化的交流，多教外国人中国的文化。 呼吁保护中国的传统文化。 考生的主要问题 1、审题： 看不懂图，造成立意错误。 只有描图，没有议论；或是只有议论， 没有描图。 2、写作技巧： 描图和议论脱节。 展开议论时，表述不清，逻辑混乱。 议论空洞，缺乏内容。 3、思维能力： 比较简单，不够活跃。 4、语言基本功： 时态、单词拼写错误多。 实用模板 1、 As can be seen in the picture, there is a small spot on the table ... The picture has a reflection in our daily life. The spot is just like a person’s strong point or weak point. … In my opinion, we should make it clear ... 2、 From the picture I can see a boy trapped by a heavy stone, on which “Laziness” was said. ... The picture really sends a message to us that ... 3、In the picture, we can see a man picking apples. But in order to pick the apples, he cuts down the tree. The picture wants to tell us that whatever we do, we shouldn’t only focus on what we are doing at present. … The picture reminds me of the environmental problems. If we pay no attention to the environment just in order to earn more money now, how can we live a happy life in the dirty surroundings? So try to think about our future when doing things. 4、 From the picture we can see that … I think the picture conveys the message that working together can bring people happiness… In my opinion, we have to realize the importance of teamwork and try to involve ourselves in the activities as much as possible. 5、 In the picture, there is a cup, which is usually presented to the winners in sports competitions... What I see in this picture reminds me of people who use a magnifying glass to see the faults in others ... Only in this way can harmony be achieved and conflicts be avoided.