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如何让考场英语作文“亮”起来 　　笔者曾多次参加高考英语的写作阅卷工作，真正的英语高分作文已不仅仅局限于用简单的语言把内容说清楚，把意思表达完整，而是要让文章的句子表达得更加地道、流畅，能吸引评卷老师的眼球。因此，要想作文得高分，考生要善于灵活运用高级句式，充分掌握句子的润色技巧，才可让考场作文亮起来。 　　请认真对照并仔细体会以下各句的一般表达与高级表达，以便在写作中恰当运用高级表达，让自己的作文亮起来。 　　一、定语从句中的介词提前 　　1. [汉语] 布鲁斯是一名知识渊博的外教，我们可以从他身上学到很多东西。 　　[一般] Bruce is a foreign teacher with a wide range of knowledge. We can learn a lot from him. 　　[高级] Bruce is a foreign teacher with a wide range of knowledge， from whom we can learn a lot. 　　2. [汉语] 我们住在那个宿舍，前面有一条小溪。 　　[一般] We lived in that dormitory. There was a small brook in front of it. 　　[高级] We lived in that dormitory， in front of which there was a small brook. 　　二、使用非谓语动词 　　3. [汉语] 正在原来校址上重建的新校将用现代化的技术来装备。 　　[一般] Our new school， which is being rebuilt in the previous place， will be well equipped with modern technology. 　　[高级] Our new school， being rebuilt in the previous place， will be well equipped with modern technology. 　　4. [汉语] 当他听到那个令人兴奋的消息后，他整夜都睡不着。 　　[一般] When he heard the exciting news， he couldn’t fall asleep overnight. 　　[高级] Hearing the exciting news， he couldn’t fall asleep overnight. 　　5. [汉语] 在这场暴风雨中，我们发现很多房子遭到意想不到的严重毁坏。 　　[一般] In the terrible rainstorm， we found that many houses were badly damaged unexpectedly. 　　[高级] In the terrible rainstorm， we found many houses badly damaged unexpectedly. 　　三、使用with和without的复合结构 　　6. [汉语]由于期末考试临近，所有学生都在忙于复习。 　　[一般] As the final term is drawing near， all the students are occupied with their revision. 　　[高级] With the final term drawing near， all the students are occupied with their revision. 　　7. [汉语]老师进入教室，同学们都在看书。 　　[一般] The teacher entered the classroom， and all students are reading their books. 　　[高级] The teacher entered the classroom， with all students reading their books. 　　8. [汉语]所有作业都顺利完成后，他和同学一起去踢球了。 　　[一般] After all his homework was well finished， he went out to play football with his classmates. 　　[高级] With all his homework well finished， he went out to play football with his classmates. 　　9. [汉语] 由于睡觉前还有这