八年级上作文典列赏析.doc

牢记写作策略，熟用写作技巧 在写作过程中，学生们要注意一下以下几点： 1．仔细看题目，选择正确时态，要点完整 英语书面表达对时态要求比较严格，不同的文体要求的时态也不一样。相对来说，现在时态常用来介绍人物、地点、学习、兴趣、爱好、生活等；过去时态常用于看图作文和日记等；将来时态常用来写通知等。 2．注意中英文表达上的差异 英美国家的人习惯于“开门见山”，学生们应在文章开头就说明这篇文章的目的，千万不可先说一大堆不相干的话，最后才落到主题。学生们可以直抒胸臆，不用拐弯抹角。 3．运用多种表达方式 在一篇书面表达中，单一地运用主语开头的句子，会使整篇文章觉得单调。我们可以指导学生使用多种结构（要求大家熟记的例文）例句如There be，It takes sb sometime to do sth 等句型，同时学生们注意句与句之间的过渡，在写作过程中多使用过渡语即连接词，如but, and, by the way, just then, next, after that, on the other hand, two days later, instead等等。 学生们在写作过程中记住这些注意点，并能运用多种表达方式，突破单一句式，这样的文章才会生动活泼，流畅自然，也会大大增加文章的可读性。 八年级书面表达典例欣赏 Unit 1 请根据下列所给的信息提示, 以 “ How to keep healthy” 为题写一篇 70 个词左右的短文. 提示: 1. No sports, no life.生命在于运动. 2. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一个苹果,医生远离我 3. famous proverb 名言 How to keep healthy? No sports, no life. Do you hear of that? That is to say, we should take more exercise every day. We can walk, run, swim, skate, or play ball games. An apple a day keeps doctors away. It’s also a famous proverb. That means we should have good eating habits. Try to eat a lot of fruit and vegetables, eat less meat or junk food. Have enough sleep every night. healthy.译文：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 仿写：______________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unit 2 你的朋友或同学是否有时感到身体不适？请选择下边任何一个话题，并提出你 的建议。 a. toothache b. stressed out c. have a cold d. tired e. have a sore throat Lily is my friend. She never exercises. She is always stressed out. She should exercise every day. She should sleep eight hours every night. She shouldn’ t just stay at home or school. She should go out with her friends. She should eat some healthy food. She shouldn’ t eat too much junk food. I think it’ s important to stay h