aalrmcy雅思写作讲义.doc

、| !_ 一个人总要走陌生的路，看陌生的风景，听陌生的歌，然后在某个不经意的瞬间，你会发现，原本费尽心机想要忘记的事情真的就这么忘记了.. All the significant information should be included; Structure Grammar Vocabulary Avoid: Personal experience Laymen words to experienced audience A类小作文 不要混淆名称！ 趋势：混合图表 Pie chart 饼图：比例的表达，‘占’的表达 Bar chart 柱状图：比较和对比 Line chart/graph 曲线图：整体和分类趋势trend tendency Table 表格： Process/flow chart 流程：理解，如水循环，森林的生长 A类小作文 三原则： Objectivity 客观性： No ‘I’ or ‘We’ 语态：主动/被动 Use things/time as subjects Avoid therefore, thus, hence etc. Carefulness 观察细致： Hidden characteristics Accuracy 精确性： Tense Time point/marker 时间描述： In + 月份/年/年代 For/during + 时间段 During the first/second half of the year During the remainder of the year From…to…/ between…and… Until… At the end of the year/century Before/after/ around/about In 1980s In the period between … and … Over the period … to … / over a ten-year period/ over the past two decades Throughout the 19th century 整体格式： Beginning: 1段—1/2句 Body: 1-2段—6-8句 Conclusion: 1段—1/2句 Approximately 8-12 sentences with each no less than 15 words. 写作步骤： 看题——1分钟 分析图表——2分钟 开头——2分钟 中间——12分钟 结尾——2分钟 检查——1分钟 总共：20分钟 开头： 2 patterns Paraphrase the rubric: 1 sentence subjects, fields, location, date Define what the graph is about + overall trend: 2 sentences Do not copy the rubric! Do not list specific figures! The graph(s) and chart(s) and table(s) , based on …(调查研究), illustrate/display/unfold a clear picture of …(主要内容) in …（地方/方面）+时间 As is reflected/revealed/shown/illustrated in the graphs, the number/percentages of …surged/subsided/ fluctuated/differed dramatically/gently + 时间 Avoid ‘According to the diagram …’ Examples: The charts unfold a clear picture of seven major reasons for adults to take up study and how the costs should be distributed among individuals, employers and taxpayers in people’s minds. As is displayed in the charts below, adults took up study for a variety of reasons and the costs were expected to be shared by individuals, employers and