Howtodoerrorcorrectioninanessay.学案.doc

How to do error correction in an essay 同 步 学 案 Pan chun rong From ShiYan middle school I. Teaching goals : By learning in this class,every student can grasp some ways of doing error correction in an essay and improve the ability to do error correction in an essay . II. Teaching design : This content is divided into two periods . The first period 第一课时 I. 短文改错的要求 ( 2014年新课标全国卷I ) 短文改错： （每小题1分,共计10分） (请按要求改错，否则不得分! ) 假定英语课上，老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出增加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 II. A master hands first small display : 牛刀小试： Dear editor, I am a active high school student. A few days ago , one of my good friend told me that he was going to stop school. He said that he want to start his own business. I tried my best to get him change his mind, and failed. I realize it is difficult of me to change her mind. He is not doing good in his studies. The process is more important than the result. Now there are only 90 days leaving before the test. I am not sure that whether his decision is right or wrong. I’m looking forward to your help. I need your advice. III. 短文改错考点归纳： 名词错误 1.Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. 2.I would appreciate it if you can give me some advices on how to keep healthy. 3.The teacher gave us lots of informations. Strike while the iron is hot ：趁热打铁： 1. His many friend went travelling abroad. 2. We have funs at the seaside. 3.Jim has made great progresses in learning English. 冠词错误 1.(2013辽宁卷) Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson