学年周六测试一写作.pptVIP

基础写作 07年广东英语高考基础写作分析 （1）题目：基础写作(共1小题，满分15分) 上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据： 1）你读完故事后的感受(篇幅不用太长,通常2-3句话, 结构可以是:总体感受→解释说明) After reading this passage, I think Koshenka is such an outstanding teenager that he makes money through jobs he likes, though he has come across failures and difficulties. I admire both him and his independence(婉霓) After reading the story, I am greatly touched by Logan. As a student, it’s hard to be economically independent but he made it by never giving up and trying over and over again.(范文) 2）举例谈谈你自己或朋友一次挣钱的经历 As an average teenager, I also had a part-time job experience. Last summer vacation, with seeing my parents’ hardship in supporting our family, I decided to go to a toy factory so as to share their economic burden. Therefore, I got up so early that I could have more time to work, but the weather was too hot and the work was too boring to let me stand. Every time when I wanted to give up, I would tell myself that my parents is harder than me, so I insisted at last.(曼琪) 2）举例谈谈你自己或朋友一次挣钱的经历 The story reminds me of my experience of earning money myself. It was a time when I was on a summer vacation. Being bored, I decided to find a job to make some money. So I worked in a factory. After that, I had to struggle for getting up earlier so that I could go to work on time. What’s more, I nearly did the same things day by day and felt exhausted when a day ended. Despite the hard work, I got what I deserved a month later. It was not until then that I realized how difficult it was to make money.(林柱) 3）你认为是否应该提倡中学生挣钱并列举理由 应该挣钱: I am in favor of students’ making money./I am for students’ making money. I agree with students’ making money. 理由:..buy what we want and release our parents’ economic burden. …improve living skills so that we are likely to find a good job ..have a chance to learn how to communicate with others …gain more knowledge and broaden our horizons * 语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。 0 每多或少写一