2011年四级写作2011四级写作年四级写作.ppt

Writing 一.评分标准: 14 11 8 5 2 二.四级考试作文评分主要看以下四个方面： 1.内容：不要跑题 (notes: 1,2) 2.字迹：干净整洁 3.结构：脉络清晰, 内容完整，连接自然 (notes) 4.语言：及格模式和高分模式 高分模式 逻辑清晰： 形式多变： 1 词语多变 2 句式多变 1.1 词语多变之一： 去旧换新Use the expressions that are rarely used 表认为：think 表重要：important 表越来越：more and more 表顺序的词：firstly, secondly 1.2词语多变之二：以多代少 Use phrases instead of words e.g. I cannot bear it. I want it. I cannot contact him. 1.3词语多变之三：避虚就实 Use specific words instead of general words 说，看，走，好，Kino is a good teacher. 2.句式变化的方法： 2.1 前置 政府为了解决这个问题做了很多事情 The government has done a lot to solve this problem. To solve this problem, the government has done many things as follows: (taken many effective measures) 2.2 从句 最近的一个热点话题就是是否大学应该对游人开放. Recently, a most heated topic is whether the universities and colleges should be open to the tourists. Recently, the topic (which/that) people are talking about most is whether the universities and colleges should be open to the tourists. Recently, what people are talking about most is whether the universities and colleges should be open to the tourists. 2.3 主动变被动 people pay attention to … attention is paid to … … attract/draw people’s attention people are attracted by/ drawn to… … should take some measures to… some measures should be taken by…to… Exercise I find the book in classroom. I lost it yesterday. I lost the book yesterday, and/ but now I find it in classroom. I find the book I lost in classroom yesterday. The book lost in classroom yesterday was found finally. 大学生就业越来越难的问题受到普遍关注 Collage students find it increasingly difficult to get a job, which has widely attracted much attention in recent years. 2.4 其他方法 1. 倒装句 2. 强调句 3. 否定句或双重否定句 4. 长短句结合 5. 修辞格（排比和并列） 长短句结合 As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are quite different. 修辞格(排比和并列) 1. Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or si