2017年高考英语二轮复习 核心考点总动员 专题46 短文改错（二）（含解析）.doc

专题 短文改错（） 关键词：语法,,句法,逻辑,语境 难度系数：????推荐指数：????? 【基础回顾】 考点归纳： 基础必读： There the air is clean or the mountains are green. 【2015·新课标全国I】The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. 【解析】 airs—air 句意：我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词用法错误。名词air为不可数名词。 【技能方法】 名词、代词 检查是否有数、格或指代不一致的错误 并列主语，从句、不定代词、集合名词、非谓语动词、时间、金钱等作主语及together with等引导的成分修饰主语 检查谓语动词是否与主语保持一致 固定短语、词组 检查副词、介词、冠词是否使用错误 平行结构 检查是否有词性和连接两个对等的词和对等的结构并列连词错误 有比较结构 检查是否有形容词、副词的级，程度副词，比较的对象以及冠词方面的错误 有转折、因果、对比等结构 检查是否有行文逻辑方面的错误 多重结构句 检查是否有时态、语态、引导词或成分短缺错误 有特殊动词结构 检查是否有非谓语动词或虚拟语气方面的错误 非谓语动词作状语、表语或定语 检查是否非谓语动词和逻辑主语不一致 最后，关键的一点就是要再次细读全文，按句法要求、词类规则，检查所改的答案能否使全文语气流畅，行文逻辑发展是否合乎情理，所做的标记是否符合命题要求。 【基础达标】 I have planned an autumn outing for my class next week, and?I’m writing to ask your permission. First, the place where we’ve decided to visit?–?the Forest Park is not far away from the city. We can take a bus and ride a bike to get there. Second, the trip would provide us with a great opportunity to get close to the nature. Third, we need to spare some time to take some physical exercises. Some teachers as well as Mr Wang is going to join us to make sure of our safe. We are all looking forward to receive your permission. We will appreciate you if you can kindly give us an immediate reply. 【解析】 试题分析：计划下周进行秋天的郊游，写信请求许可。 1.ask∧ your ---for 固定搭配：ask for sth.请求某事，故在ask∧ your ---for。 2.where ---which or that the place做先行词，指物，在后面的定语从句中作宾语，故把where ---which or that。 3. and---or 句意：我们能成公共汽车或骑自行车到那里。根据句意可知把and---or。 4.would---will 根据前面的next week,可知应该用一般将来时态，故把would---will。 5.去掉the nature中的the nature做“大自然”讲时前面不用冠词，故去掉the nature中的the。 【能力提升】 Last month, I rode bus to my office ten miles away. I carried only a few cash to last each week. One night, as I walk to the usual bus stop, I met a beggar whom had no legs. I stopped and opened my wallet, but I was discovered that I had no money at all. I apologized to him immediate. I became worried so I had no way to get ho me. At my surprise, the beggar pulled out many coin from h