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SAT写作中会考到“竞争合作”类话题，直观一点的题目有 Do people achieve more success by?cooperation?than by?competition? 稍微灵活一点的题目也有 Are?organizations or groups?most successful when their members pursue?individual wishes and goals? Do we need?other people?in order to understand?ourselves? 所以，同学们在准备SAT写作的时候，务必准备好反映“竞争”或者“合作”的例子，为了让写作文章的思维全面，内容翔实，我们尽量做到有理有据。于是我在此贴出两段文字： 第一段文字，来自互联网，主要用理证的方式说出competition可能带来的危害（损人不利己）： Competition can cause injury to the organisms involved, and drain valuable resources and energy. Human competition can be expensive, as is the case with political elections, international sports competitions, and advertising wars. It can lead to the compromising of ethical standards in order to gain an advantage; for example, several athletes have been caught using banned steroids in professional sports in order to boost their own chances of success or victory. And it can be harmful for the participants, such as athletes who injure themselves exceeding the physical tolerances of their bodies, or companies that pursue unprofitable paths while engaging in competitive rivalries. 翻译： 竞争会对相关组织造成伤害，虚耗宝贵的资源和能量。人类的你争我夺代价太高，我们从政治竞选、国际体育比赛和广告战中可见一斑。竞争会让我们放弃道德标准去谋取利益，比如，很多运动员为了增加夺冠机会，被发现在职业比赛中使用违禁的类固醇（A?steroid?is a type of chemical substance found in your body. Steroids can be artificially introduced into the bodies of athletes to improve their strength. Steroids are sometimes used illegally by people doing sports to improve their performance）竞争可能对角力者有害，比如那些因为超越了体能极限而受伤的运动员，又或是那些用非盈利途径和对手竞争的公司企业。 第二段文字，是我在2011年10月为了给同学们提供比较有参考价值的SAT例子亲自写出来的。例子的角度是支持“合作”，所以这类例子选取体育类，商业类最容易操作。我想起自己从小学到现在最喜欢的篮球明星始终是MJ，于是就用乔丹作为例子的主线，描写他的两次“三连冠”。 但是，非常重要的一点需要指出，当同学们用体育明星去贯穿“合作”这个概念的时候，文字中除了对自己的偶像表达崇敬爱戴之外，还要尽量弱化这个明星的个人光环，强调集体的力量。比如，写乔丹的时候，就不能总是说乔丹如何如何，而要说这支球队如何如何，尤其是例子接近尾声的时候，结论句一定要突出的是“团队”，而不是“个人”。 例子如下： Cooperation serves as the powerful key to the door of splendid achievements.?Such an idea can perfectly be exemplified by the legendary story of the Chicago Bulls, the once invincible basketball team in NBA h