Unit 1 Lifestyles Period Five Communication Workshop 课件（北师大版必修1，课标通版）.ppt

【写作要求】 1．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 2．词数：100左右。 【写作分析】 第一步：审题谋篇 1．明确书信的格式。分为三部分： 1)开头部分：交代写信的目的 2)主体部分：根据要求写具体内容。本书信的主要内容：①李磊近期表现；②朋友的作用；③对李磊提出的劝告； 3)结束部分。 2．确定体裁、时态、人称。本文所写书信应用第一人称来写；书信的主体部分应用过去时，因为涉及李磊过去已做过的事情，但也将自己对他的做法发表看法，应用一般现在时。 第二步：提炼要点 1．有时，为了和朋友玩，你甚至不上课。 ①有时　____________ ②为了 ____________ ③上课 ____________ 2．作为你的朋友，我为你担忧。 ①作为你的朋友　____________ ②担忧　____________ 3．真正的朋友不会让你去做坏事。 ①真正的朋友　____________ ②做坏事　____________ 4．是你该想一想这个问题的时候了。 ①是……的时候了　　____________ ②想一想这个问题　　____________ 答案　1.①sometimes/at times/now and then　②in order to/so as to　③have/attend classes　2.①being/as one of your best friends　②be worried about/be anxious about/be concerned for　3.①true friends　②do something wrong　4.①It’s time for sb to do sth/It’s time that you did/should do sth　②think about the problem 第三步：扩点成句 1．I’m writing to you because I think I have something really serious to communicate with you. 2．Sometimes, you even didn’t have classes in order to play with your friends. 3．Being one of your best friends, I’m very worried about you. 4．It’s time for you to think about the problem I talked about above. 【参考范文】 Dear Li Lei， I am writing to you because I think I have something really serious to communicate with you. I noticed that recently you often went to the Internet Bar and the Game Center together with several friends. Sometimes, you even didn’t have classes in order to play with your friends. Being one of your best friends, I’m very worried about you. Friends play an important part in one’s life. We have to choose our friends carefully. True friends will never ask us to do something wrong. I don’t think the friends around you are your true friends. It’s time for you to think about the problem I talked about above. And I do hope you will make a wise decision soon. Yours， Wang Wei 【写作模板】 Topic Date Dear________， I’m so glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ________. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to ________，as you’ll ________.Then, it also