Unit 3 A healthy life Period 3　Grammar Writing 课件（人教版选修6，课标通用）.ppt

⑨—Do you have my pen, Mary? —Yes, I have________right here. A．one B．it C．this D．that 解析　此题极易错选A项。one相当于a pen。根据上下文，本句中的it 指代上文中的 my pen，因此为特指。 答案　B 劝告信 【写作任务】 假如你是李华，你的笔友Jane最近总是感觉身体不适，懒于锻炼，请你给他写一封劝告信 【写作内容】 告诉他想要保持健康，需做到以下几点： 1．合理饮食； 2．锻炼身体； 3．保持睡眠； 4．定期检查身体。 【写作要求】 词数：120左右。 【写作分析】　 第一步：认真审题 一审体裁：本次写作要求写一封劝告信，属于应用文写作范畴。劝告的目的，是为了让人们的行为更加合理， 对达到某一目的或实现某一愿望更加有利。一般说来，劝告比建议语气更重一些，有时还略带几分强制的意味，像 Youd better...就属于这一类句型。 二审格式：劝告信的格式和普通信件格式相同。 三审结构和语气：结构：此劝告信可采用“三段式”写法，第一段提出问题，第二段写“三要三不要”，第三段表明自己的看法和期望。 语气：劝告时要注意方法和分寸。在英美国家，对家人或亲友提出劝告时通常都比较随便和直截了当，但需要注意的是，对长辈不宜用“Youd better...”或“Why not..？”等较强硬的口气；当对其他人提出忠告感到困难或不易时，则常采用一种更为正式或间接委婉的表达方式。 第二步：提炼要点 1．feel like doing sports 2．having a good diet 3．another good way of 4．keep yourself healthy 5．be bad for 6．It is better to do 7．have regular check ups 8．spot other problems 第三步：扩点成句 1．I learn that you arent feeling well and dont feel like doing sports these days. 2．Having a good diet is very important. 3．Doing exercise is another good way of keeping yourself healthy. 4．Some things are bad for your health. 5．It is better to try and give up these things. 6．It is important to have regular check ups with a dentist. 7．The doctor will be able to help you spot other problems. 【参考范文】 Dear Jane， Im delighted to hear from you, but I learn that you arent feeling well and dont feel like doing sports these days. Here are some things you can do to keep yourself healthy. Having a good diet is very important. This means eating lots of different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables. Doing exercise is another good way of keeping yourself healthy. Exercise makes you fitter and helps you relax. Some things are bad for your health, like smoking and drinking alcohol. It is better to try and give up these things or at least do them less. It is important to have regular check ups with a dentist who will check your teeth. You can also visit an optician who will check your eyes. Y