TEM82011年翻译部分讲解.ppt

句[2]学生译文（1）：But in reality, person now tend to be in a frequent hurry among the two lifestyles, and sometimes even themselves couldn’t tell whether he is at leisure or in a hurry. (2分样卷) 以上译文出自一份2分样卷，形态上错误很多，主要是数（number）、格（case）的问题。人们应该用people ,而不是person。 “两种（生活方式）间”应该是between..., 而不是among ...。原文“有时也说不清自己到底是‘休闲着’还是‘匆忙着’”，译文主语是they, 是themselves；whether he is应改为whether they are。试比较： cf. But in reality, people now tend to be in a frequent hurry between the two lifestyles, and sometimes even they couldn’t tell whether they are at leisure or in a hurry. 句[3]学生译文(1)：For example, we may receipt a phone call from our work or our clients. But at the very moment, we are enjoying our vacation in the sites of tourist interesting. In this case, the modern, convenience and advance tool demonstrates its ferocious and gloom aspect, spoiling the cheer mood of us. The restness of the vacation is unlike to live up to its name because of anxious troubling us. 以上译文主要错误是“词性”（parts of speech）问题。试比较修改后的划线部分： cf. For example, we may receive a phone call from our work or our clients. But at the very moment, we are enjoying our vacation in the sites of tourist interest. In this case, the modern, convenient and advanced tool demonstrates its ferocious and gloomy aspect, spoiling the cheerful mood of us. The rest of the vacation is unlikely to live up to its name because of the anxiety troubling us. 句[3]学生译文(2)：For example, while we are enjoying our holidays at a resorts, suddenly there are telephone call from our boss. The boss inform us that great troubles has occurred in our clients or works. The convenient and advanced tools of modern time has shown the vicious and gloomy side which make us loose all the interests. After that, the leisures only have their names. We are very worried. 以上译文主要错误是“数”（number）的形态问题。试比较修改后的划线部分： cf. For example, while we are enjoying our holidays at a resort, suddenly there are telephone calls from our boss. The boss informs us that great troubles