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七夕，古今诗人惯咏星月与悲情。吾生虽晚，世态炎凉却已看透矣。情也成空，且作“挥手袖底风”罢。是夜，窗外风雨如晦，吾独坐陋室，听一曲《尘缘》，合成诗韵一首，觉放诸古今，亦独有风韵也。乃书于纸上。毕而卧。凄然入梦。乙酉年七月初七。啸之记。 雅思大作文写作方法+常用表达 【Abby阿布整理】 2008.05 6 大作文task2 6.1Band Task response Coherence cohesion Lexical resource Grammer range and accuracy 9 ? fully addresses all parts of the task ? presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas ? uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention ?skilfully manages paragraphing ?uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’ ?uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and accuracy; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’ 8 ? sufficiently addresses all parts of the task ? presents a well-developed response to the question with relevant, extended and supported ideas ?sequences information and ideas logically ?manages all aspects of cohesion well ? uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately ?uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings ?skilfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation ?produces rare errors in spelling and/or word formation ?uses a wide range of structures ? the majority of sentences are error-free ? makes only very occasional errors or inappropriacies 7 ? addresses all parts of the task ?presents a clear position throughout the response ?presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus ? logically organises information and ideas; there is clear progression throughout ?uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use ? presents a clear central topic within each paragraph ? uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision ? uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style a