常见的新托福综合写作错误.docVIP

常见的新托福综合写作错误 朗阁海外考试研究中心 随着新托福考试的持续升温，越来越多考生发现新托福写作成为了制约他们考出理想成绩的一大障碍。接下来，朗阁托福专家将就综合写作的常见错误进行深入探讨并给出迅速提高分数的“捷径”。 ? 1.?no reference of the passage ? 新托福的写作都是以0-5分作为评分范围的，然后再折算成30分的分数。首先我们有必要看一下4分和3分的评分标准的差别： ? 4分的要求是： A response at this level is generally good in selecting the important information from the lecture and in coherently and?accurately presenting this information in relation to the relevant information in the reading, but it may have?minor omission, inaccuracy, vagueness, or imprecision of some content from?the lecture or?in connection to points made in the reading. A response is also scored at this level if it has more frequent or noticeable minor language errors, as long as such usage and grammatical structures do not result in anything more than an occasional lapse of clarity or in the connection of ideas. ? 下面我们再来对比下3分的要求： A response at this level contains some important information from the lecture and?conveys some relevant connection to the reading, but it is marked by one or more of the following: l?Although the overall response is definitely oriented to the task, it conveys only?vague, global, unclear, or somewhat imprecise connection?of the points made in the lecture to points?made in the reading. l?The response may omit one major key point made in the lecture. l?Some key points?made in the lecture or reading, or connections between the two, may beincomplete, inaccurate, or imprecise. l?Errors of usage and/or grammar may be more frequent or may result in noticeably vague expressions or obscured meanings in conveying ideas and connections. ? 从上述的2个评分标准来看，划线的部分对于作文和阅读信息的关联有很明确的说明，4分的要求中可以允许有一些不够准确、含糊其辞的描述，但是总体必须要正确；而3分的要求则降低了这一标准。但是现实情况是，很多考生在平时训练中或者在考试时，基本不去关联阅读的信息，甚至对于阅读的内容只字不提。其实这样做是很吃亏的，大家都知道在考试的时候阅读原文是可以看到的，尽管综合写作的主要内容是以讲座信息为主，但是如果一味地描述教授在讲座中的观点，而忽略了和阅读文章的关系，那么分数一般不会超过3分。下面我们就来看一个例子： ? The lecture and the paragraph are completely contradictory.?First of all, the lecture says that the work of the group is going to be recognized in a?whole, not i