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书面表达（3） 阅读有关上海世博会的短文：1.找出运用非谓语动词和从句的句子。2.思考：高分作文具备的几个条件？ Shanghai Expo is the first comprehensive World Expo held in a developing country. And it is also the first one that takes “the city” as its theme, hoping that it can push forward the city development and help bring about a better urban living environment, just like the theme: better city, better life. Since the 2010 World Expo is around the corner, the Shanghai government is busy preparing for it and our city has taken on a new look. First and foremost, as we all know, many beautiful and creative pavilions of different countries have been built for the exhibition in the Expo site along the Huangpu River. Besides, the government also pays great attention to the improvement of public transportation. We citizens can find that many roads have been widened and several new metro lines are being built now. Furthermore, the common people of all ages are keen on learning English and even took some foreign language courses, because they hope to be a volunteer for the World Expo. There is no doubt that we have made great achievements, but these are still not enough. For example, first, in my point of view, as the host, we Shanghainese ought to be better informed of the related knowledge of the Expo in order to help foreign visitors. Moreover, some citizens’ spiritual quality is far from satisfactory so that they sometimes disobey “7 Don’ts”. In short, holding a successful world Expo needs our joint effort. As the theme of Expo 2010 said, Better City, Better Life, it represents the common wish of the whole humankind for a better living in future urban environments. 语言地道，规范，符合英语表达习惯 1.内容要点全； 2.词汇和语法的数量和准确性高； 3.上下文的连贯性好； 4.语言表达得体 恰当、准确、较多应用 有效地使用语句间的连接成分（过渡，并列或从属连词） 高分作文具备的几个条件： 非谓语动词或从句之间相互改写 (1) We should drink water which has been boiled. We should drink boiled water. （2）They took the woman who was injured to the nearby hospital at once. They took the injured woman to the nearby h