书面表达-如何扩充句子解读.ppt

如何从形式上胜人一筹？ １、附加成分作解释说明 方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内容 １、附加成分作解释说明 １、附加成分作解释说明 In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise. As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits , vegetables, less fast food and junk food. Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies. Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies. 3.制定合理的计划， 时间表 合成文章 Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned. Why are teens getting fatter and fatter? In my opinion, there are two remarkable reasons for this problem. For one thing , because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework to do. They are getting less exercise than before. For another , because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight. On the other hand, aroused /On the one hand, Thank you! Bye-bye! * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 英语书面表达指导 短话长说 —— 高考评分标准 第五档（21-25） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的，覆盖所有的内容要点，用了丰富的语法结构，语法与高级词汇有少些错误，全篇流畅，连词使用较好。 第四档（16-20） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的，写漏了一两个要点，语法和词汇基本正确，有少些错误，主要是想使用高级词汇与复杂句子所致。 第二档 （6-10） ： 未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，但表达不清晰，只有一些句子可读。 第一档 （1-5） ：未完成试题规定的任务，只是一些字词的堆积，不成句，让读者根本不明白写什么。 0分：空白，或者抄写一些无关的东西。 第三档（11-15） ： 大错（时态、句子结构等）超过五六处，不能及格，写漏了一些内容，但覆盖了主要要点，基本上让人能够看懂，基本达到了预期目的。 高考作文评分原则 １．形式上胜人一筹，也就是文章结构，谴词造句 ２．内容要点，发挥想象，适当拓展 一、利用文章总体模板 1. 文章开头的总体交待 —— 引出主题 A. Recently, we had a discussion about … B. we carried out a survey of … C. When it comes to the topic whether … 2. 呈现不同的观点 —— 陈述观点 A. Some of them are in favor of the idea that… However,