全国卷高考英语写作之求职信写作指导(作文评讲)解读.ppt

Writing: A Letter of Job Application 2016届全市调研作文 假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid Senior ESCH 面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学院课间服务事项，请根据以下内容用英语写一份求职信，要点包括： 你的英语水平； 你的工作经验； 你做好这份工作的信心 Type of writing: A letter of job application Purpose of writing: to apply for a job to c_______ the employer to hire you Language : polite convincing/persuasive, logical Tense: The simple present tense (introduction), The present perfect tense/The simple past tense (experience) convince II Structure of the letter 求职信结构 Para.1：the opening paragraph: purpose of the letter How do you know about the recruitment? Which position are you applying for? Para.2: the body: detailed introduction about yourself (Your name) a high school graduate your English proficiency(水平) your working experience Para.3: the closing paragraph conclusion, hope, thanks your confidence (conclusion) your hope to be interviewed Thank you for your time and consideration. III The content Purpose of the letter: to convince the employer to hire you So you should write something that… highlights your advantages avoids your shortcomings is relevant/related to the position !! My English is not so good, but I will try my best. Secondly, I have worked in other companies before, where I have gotten enough working experience. Supporting ideas in Para.2 Your English proficiency: 英语很好 have a good command of English 口头、笔头英语流利 be fluent in both spoken and written English 令人满意的阅读技能 satisfactory reading skills 在高考中取得好成绩 got good grades in the college entrance examination 在演讲比赛中屡获佳绩 received a good many awards in speech contests 中老年英语培训机构; 暑期兼职辅导员; 负责学院课间服务事项 Your experience 社区志愿者，定期为老人提供服务? 和老人相处得好，沟通容易 a community volunteer; offer services to the old regularly; get along well communicate easily 社区志愿者，教老人英语? 培养了耐心，责任心 teach the elderly English; develop my patience and sense of responsibility Supporting ideas in Para.2 Example 1 (Score: 20) Example 2 (Score: 22