中考作文优选详解.ppt

Dear Miss Li, 　　I think youd better use English in class. When you speak English, well have a good chance to improve our listening kills .It is also helpful for our reading, speaking and writing. We can copy what you say all the time. The more chances we have, the more progress we will make ! So I hope you can teach in English. But please use simple English as much as possible and speak clearly and slowly. This way, we can learn English better and better. 　　Hopefully you can think about it. 　　Best wishes! 　　Yours, 　　 Li Hua ★我国是大熊猫生存的唯一之地，然而他们正面临灭绝的危险。你认为我们该采取哪些措施来保护他们。写一篇70词左右的短文表达你的观点。 提示处于困境人们大量砍伐树木来建农田和盖房；竹子越来越少；人们为皮毛二捕杀大熊猫采取措施: 建立自然保护区；不买皮毛制的衣服最后结果大熊猫会越来越多 提示词：fur皮毛reserve保护区hunt猎杀 What can we do to protect the Pandas? The Pandas live only in China. However they are endangered animals. One of reasons is people are cutting down many trees to build their houses. And the bamboo is becoming less and less. Another reason is people have hunted a lot of pandas for their fur.I think we should do something to protect The Pandas. For example. We should set up Nature Reserve. We should not buy fur clothesIf we can do these, I think The pandas will be more and more. Composition 中考作文 四点要求 1. 内容完整 2. 语句流畅 3.没有语法错误 4. 书写规范 扣分点 各省中考作文一般在15-20分。 1. 字数 中考作文一般不少于60字，16分以上的作文没有低于75字，当然也极少超过100字。 一篇好文章字数应该在75-80之间。 2. 语法与拼写错误 每个扣0.5分，重复错误不计。 标点错误：每4个扣0.5分。 加分点 1.根据学生使用的复杂句，单词和谚语，俗语情况来加分。 文章中有一个亮点就可以加1分。 例如强调句型， only倒装句等，只要多操练，几乎一定能用到作文中。 2.卷面分 阅卷标准力没有这一项，但这一项却真实反映在学生的分数里，“印象分” 标准： 没有斜体 没有连笔 涂改较少 三段式作文： 第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过两句话。 第二段：分2-3点论证第一段的观点。 第三段：切忌不要重复前两段内容，要有升华，也可以提出建议和希望等。 模式 中考作文一般给出几点,在文中必须体现出来，文章这几点缺一不可。 要点 衔接 句子之间的关系连接需要逻辑词 1. 递进词 一般词： first， second， third，finally 高级词汇： first of all 首先 in addition, what’s more, moreover 另外 in a word, all in all 总结 2.转折词： but, yet, however（然而）after all 毕竟 Though/even though虽然，尽管，即使 3.因果词： because, because of, since, as, for, thanks to, as a result, so