2014年广州一模英语写作讲评.pptx

2014年广州一模英语作文讲评基础写作写作内容：白茶——中国六大茶类之一名字由来：因呈银白色而得名主要产地：福建、台湾历史：最早出现于北宋特点：形如银针，外形优美；口感甘甜；年份越久，功效越好。功效：常饮有益健康，可预防高血压等疾病，还可辅助治疗牙痛和发烧等。基础写作主要考查考生的语言结构的应用能力：能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。要求考生使用5个句子表达【写作内容】中所提供的全部内容第一句：第二句：第三句：第四句：第五句：介绍白茶——中国六大茶类之一和名字由来介绍主要产地和历史介绍特点1介绍特点2主要介绍功效1、白茶因呈银白色而得名，被认为中国六大茶类之一。2、追溯到北宋时期，白茶有着悠久的历史，最早出现于福建和台湾。3、白茶因形如银针，口感甘甜，医疗效果而出名。4、年份越久，功效越好。5、假如经常饮用，白茶对健康有益，可预防疾病，比如高血压，并且可辅助治疗牙痛和发烧等。1、白茶因呈银白色而得名，被认为中国六大茶类之一。White Tea, which gets its name from its silver-white colour, is regarded as one of the six major Chinese tea types.Baicha, one of the six marjor Chinese tea types, gets its name from its silver-white colour.2、追溯到北宋时期，白茶有着悠久的历史，最早出现于福建和台湾。Dating back to the Beisong Dynasty, White Tea has a long history and it is mainly grown in Fujian and Taiwan.适当使用定语从句适当使用同位语适当使用分词短语3、白茶因形如银针，口感甘甜，医疗效果而出名。White Tea is famous for its beautiful silver-needle-like shape, its sweet taste and its medicinal effects.能将多项并列的内容用简单、清晰的结构表达出来4、年份越久，功效越好。The longer it is preserved, the better effect it has.正确使用the…the…的比较结构5、假如经常饮用，白茶对健康有益，可预防疾病，比如高血压，并且可辅助治疗牙痛和发烧等。White Tea is good for health if drunk frequently and can be used in preventing diseases like high blood pressure and helping relieve the pain of toothache and fever.正确使用了if+分词，White Tea, which gets its name from its silver-white colour, is regarded as one of the six major Chinese tea types. Dating back to the Beisong Dynasty, White Tea has a long history and it is mainly grown in Fujian and Taiwan. White Tea is famous for its beautiful silver-needle-like shape, its sweet taste and its medicinal effects. The longer it is preserved, the better effect it has. White Tea is good for health if drunk frequently and can be used in preventing diseases like high blood pressure and helping relieve the pain of toothache and fever.本文的写作靓点：1、适当使用定语从句或同位语结构表述同一事物的几项相关信息，例如：White Tea, which gets its name from its silver-white colour, is regarded as one of the six major Chinese tea types.Baicha, one of the six marjor Chinese tea types,