红楼梦英译本对比翻译剖析.ppt

Yang Xianyi Vs Huo Kesi 错译 贾母王氏……今年方四十上下年纪，……(Para2,line4) 霍克斯：...she was now around fifty ...(Para3,line4) 杨宪益：she was about forty years of age...(Para3,line4) 错译 人命官司一事，他竟视为儿戏，自为花上几个臭钱，没有不了的。(Para3,last line) 霍：...accounting the charge of manslaughter a mere bagatelle...(Para8,line4) 杨：To him a murder charge was just a trifle...(Para7,line10) 错译 他母亲道：“何必如此招摇！……”（Para4,line4） 霍：Whyever should we go to any such trouble? said his mother.(Para12,line1) 杨：Why go to such trouble? she asked.(Para11,line1) 错译 贾政便使人上来对王夫人说：“……。”（Para6,line1） 霍：Jia Zheng now sent a servant round to Lady Wang with the following message:...(Para19,line3) 杨：Then Chia Cheng sent a message to his wife saying,....(Para19,line1) 错译 谁知自从在此住了不上一月的光景，贾宅族中……（Para8,line3） 霍：...before he had been there a month...(Para24,line3) 杨：To his relief, after less than a month he...(Para25,line1) 漏译 当下言不着雨村。且说那买了英莲打死冯渊的薛公子……（Para1,line1） 霍克斯：But now no more of Yu-cun. Let us turn instead to Young Xue,...(Para1,line1) 杨宪益：Let us return now to young Hsueh, who...(Para1,line1) 漏译 这薛公子学名薛蟠，表字文起，……（Para2,line1） 霍克斯：Young Husehs name was Pan, his courtesy name Wen-chi,...(Para2,line1) 杨宪益：Xue Pan, to give him his full name,...(Para2,line1) * Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 1. Salutation; Location 2. Mistranslation 3. Cultural diversity 4. Sentence structure Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 人名-称谓 原文：薛蟠 译文 Y： Hsueh Pan H： Xue Pan 分析：Y 中国人，译文的翻译面向外国人，所以参照外国人姓氏 的习惯，译成Hsueh Pan H 外国人，译文的翻译更多程度上想要贴近中国人的文化 习惯，参照中国人人姓氏的习惯，直译 Xue Pan Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Hsueh： 威妥玛式拼音法（Wade-Giles romanization）hs= x,ue=ue,h 不发音 缺点： 1、保持接近英文拼法的一些特点，但并不完全迁就英文的拼写习惯 2、没有标示送气音的符号，造成许多不同的姓在英语中无法区分 3、威式拼音系统不是很统一，一个人的名字往往 会有多种拼写方