书面表达讲评1.ppt

Expressions on one hand, on the other hand as a result of last but not least As far as I’m concerned… It is necessary for sb. to do sth. be supposed to do sth. on the contrary Expressions live in harmony with people are convinced that… keep sb. company take action to make things even worse One possible version Recently we have had a discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities. Some students think it a good idea to keep pets because many old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets. Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting. On the contrary, the other students are against the idea. In their opinion, if too many people keep pets at home, it is bad for the environment. What’s worse, pets may make too much noise and even attack people. I like animals, so I don’t think it’s bad to keep pets at home. But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment. Yours sincerely, Li Hua * * 书面表达评讲 假设你叫李华，你班同学参加了“二十一世纪中学生英文报”组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：城市内是否可以豢养宠物（狗和猫）。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社投稿，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点或建议。 1. 安慰孤寡老人 2. 人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣 1. 造成环境污染 2. 吵闹声，甚至伤人 支持饲养宠物的同学认为： 反对饲养宠物的同学认为： 写作步骤： 一、审题。 二、语言组织。 三、检查修改。 一、审题 1. 审主题 2. 审人称 3. 审时态 4. 审要点 5. 审框架 审主题： 城市内是否可以豢养宠物（狗和猫） 2. 审人称： 给报社投稿，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点或建议。 故人称为第一人称和第三人称。 3.审时态： 一般过去现在时为主，其它时态为辅。 4. 列要点： ①、你班同学参加了“二十一世纪中学生英文报”组织的一场讨论。 ②、反对饲养宠物的同学认为： ③、支持饲养宠物的同学认为： ④、自己的观点或建议 5. 谋篇：三段法模式 ①、第一段：反对饲养宠物的同学认为： ②、第二段：支持饲养宠物的同学认为： ③、第三段：自己的观点或建议 二、语言组织： 1. 选词组织要点。 2. 扩词成句。 3. 整理成篇。 → on the way / around the corner . The exam is coming . Nowadays, people think gratefulness is very important . → be of great importance / attach great importance to 一、使用较高级的词汇