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PAGE  PAGE 7 July 2009 writing training about persons Writing 1 a loved teacher (2009 7 高二下学期英语期末考试作文) 假设你班转来一名英国学生，他想了解一下班主任王老师的一些情况。请用英语为他写一篇介绍王老师的文章。 写作内容： 1.王老师，男，毕业于北京师范大学，广州市“十佳”英语教师之一；工作一贯努力，曾多次受到表扬； 2. 他知识丰富，爱好广泛，教学有方，上课生动有趣，深受学生欢迎； 3. 虽然对学生要求严格，但他与学生关系融洽；他是学生的良师益友，深受大家的尊重和爱戴。 写作要求： 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 评分标准 句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性 Our head teacher Mr. Wang, a graduate from Beijing Normal University and one of the top ten teachers of English in Guangzhou, always works hard and has been praised many times for this. He’s a teacher of wide (broad/ample) knowledge and a variety of hobbies. He teaches so well and his lessons are so lively (vivid) and interesting that he is very popular with the students. Although he’s strict with us, he gets on (along) well with us. In a word, he is loved and respected deeply as our good teacher and friend. Our head teacher Mr. Wang, who graduated from Beijing Normal University, is one of the top ten teachers of English in Guangzhou. He has been praised many times for his hard work. With broad knowledge and a variety of hobbies, he gave the lessons in a lively and interesting way, for which he is warmly welcomed by the students. Not only is he a great teacher, but also a good friend. 写作注意事项: 基础词汇和短语的表达和正确应用； 动词的正确时态和语态； 使用定语从句、连词、介词、同位语来包含尽可能多的信息。 适当使用强调句或倒装句等句型结构。 July 2009 writing training about persons Writing 2 a pioneer for all people 你的外国笔友想了解中国的科学家，你准备介绍袁隆平。以下是有关袁隆平的资料： 基本情况：1930年出生于一个贫苦农民的家庭，1953年毕业于西南农业大学。他的脸庞和手臂被太阳晒得黝黑，身躯瘦削而又结实，就像其他千百万农民一样。 成就：1974年成为世界上第一位种植“超级杂教水稻”的农业先锋。现在袁博士在印度、越南和其他很多欠发达国家传播提高水稻产量的知识。由于他的研究，联合国在消除世界饥饿的战斗中有了更多的方法。 自我评价：尽管是中国最著名的科学家之一，袁隆平仍然认为自己是个农民。 超级杂交水稻：super hybrid rice 写作要求：只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准：句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 写作建议：复习M4 U2; 建议使用连词、非谓语动词、强调句 Born into a poor farmer’s family in 1930, Yuan Longping graduated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953. His sunburnt face and arms and his slim, strong body are just like those of millions of Chinese farmers. It is in 1974 that he