高中英语写作思路点拨.ppt

1.高级词汇短语 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。 Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的 clever →smart →wise →bright →intelligent 电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。 1.Computers are very important in our life. 2.Computers play a very important role in our life. 3.computers are of great importance in our life. 2，句式多样，文章增“靓” 使用较丰富的句式：运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 他昨天下午来的。 1.He came here yesterday afternoon. 2.He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon. 3.Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. 4.It was yesterday afternoon that he came here. 思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文 无遗漏信息点（审题） 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 句式多样 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组 化腐朽为神奇十 式 一、将两个简单句合并为并列句。 操作难度★★ 写作效果★★ 1. You can do it. I can do it. One of us must do it. you I must do it. 二、主动句与被动句的互换。  操作难度★★★ 写作效果★★★ The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present financial crisis. 三、 将陈述句改为感叹句。  操作难度★★★ 写作效果★★★ 1. To prevent the pollution is very important． How ！ 2. She is a clever girl． What ! How important it is to prevent the pollution! what a clever girl she is! 四、将陈述句改为倒装句。 操作难度★★★★ 写作效果★★★★ 1. I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time. Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time. 2. We did not realize our mistakes until at that time. Not until at that time did we realize our mistakes. 五、将简单句改为强调句。 操作难度★★★ 写作效果★★★★ 1. Smoking did great harm to his health. 2. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents. It was smoking that did great harm to his health. It is through hard work that our money is earned by our parents. 六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。 操作难度★★★★★写作效果★★★★★ 1. 同位语和同位语从句（常用于描述人物、地点等介绍性文段） 1) Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won the first prize in Men’s 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games. (用同位语改写) ,