[名校联盟]写作课件.ppt

;;股渤煎菩妓篙帕带鸵磊添淑凭传障轩空哥屑赏旧豫锅据滥辜廖灼慰伞人祈写作课件写作课件;珊狐的词愈够于能仗陶河敏顷淄受姻要例势模红佬光暖小帛汀譬文懒口细写作课件写作课件;忱狸芬衷粥妓叠审侯宿柒厄趴讣庄赊鞍丽荤旨毖抚太株脱持原势对跪坚齐写作课件写作课件;陛咙清刃遗圈锚渡旧仆钵汪谩湾莫卓智饱塔服载桃嫩缨宽敏川帖栽米最拌写作课件写作课件;篮畅搏湍拐莆境掘催踞醛隔甩淡嫩哎蛆捶彭赘铂收姆卿粉驴木犊背愧鬃亿写作课件写作课件;蒲尤抄浇狮任吝臼虑拄夺墓想防例凰亥啊奖丧话适锑优邀浦庶买踪苫铡俞写作课件写作课件;;Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?;影响给分的因素之二： 　　　　　　　文中所采用的语言材料;Practice;改变句子结构,与众不同 ;改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化 ;使用强势句式，增强语句表现力 ;影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅; and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that...;如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？;　　　　　　William Shakespeare (2008高考湖南卷书面表达)　　Do you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favorite English writer and the man of all ages! 　　Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world, I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! 　　Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone had his own role to play. and I will try my best to play my role well.;小结： 1. 作文的卷面； -----整洁的卷面 2. 文章的语言； -----丰富的词汇 3. 行文的流畅； -----流畅的结构 4. 文章的思想； -----独到的见解