2015届高三英语一轮写作技能培优：第一阶段第三讲第六课时如何写好定语.ppt

第三部分 写作技能培优;一、前置定语与后置定语 英语中定语的位置与汉语中定语的位置有很大不同，这往往导致学生写出汉语式英语句子，成为失分的主要因素之一。 1．前置定语 名词、数词、代词、形容词、单个的分词作定语，一般用在主语或宾语前。 China is a developing country. 中国是发展中国家。;2．后置定语 短语、句子作定语时一般放于中心词的后面；另外，形容词修饰不定代词、副词作定语时也常常放于中心词的后面。 As we all know，China is a country belonging to the third world. 众所周知，中国是一个属于第三世界的国家。 The men here are always busy working on the farm. 这里的男人总是忙于在田间干活。;[温馨提示]　在使用定语时，常出现双谓语错误。 Professor Li comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow.(双谓语错误) →Professor Li from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. →Professor Li who is/comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. 二、从句作定语——定语从句 运用定语从句必须注意两点：由关系代词或关系副词所替代的成分在从句中不能重复出现；定语从句与简单句一样，也要求句子结构既正确又完整。;1.定语从句的结构 将下列每组句子连成一个含定语从句的复合句，并分析定语从句中的成分。;(2012·高考江西卷·书面表达)As we all know，books are the source of knowledge. 正如我们所知，书籍是知识的源泉。 (2013·高考天津卷·书面表达)I have been class monitor since I came to our college，which brought me a strong ability of organization. 自从上大学我一直担任班长，这使我有很强的组织能力。;句式升级：恰当地使用定语从句可以提升作文的档次。 ①Without water，man can’t live，so it is of great importance. →Water，without which man can’t live，is of great importance.(句子“瘦身”。使用定语从句后句子更简练) ②He made brilliant remarks on the famous film. →The remarks that he made on the famous film was brilliant. ③He thought of an important way to deal with it. →The way he thought of to deal with it was of great importance.(使用定语从句突出了brilliant和importance);[练一练] 把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句 ①(2012·高考辽宁卷·书面表达)Even the students have turned out to be interested in the subject. The students used to dislike English. →___________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________;②(2012·高考江苏卷·书面表达)To avoid such conflicts，we should be kind to one another.It is essential to enjoy a harmonious life. →___________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ ③They planted the trees.The trees didn’t need much water. →____________________________________________