【必威体育精装版教师备课专用】2013-2014学年高中英语选修6：Unit3Ahealthylife课件Writing.ppt

人教课标 高二 选修 6 Unit 3;;; 英文建议信属于应用文写作范畴，是向征询建议者就某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。;高考中此类信件多属于半开放性作文，要求考生根据所给的材料(多为征求建议信)，提出合理化建议，或者给出有针对性的解决办法。;建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，并且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要委婉礼貌。此外，建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、语言要具有合理性和说服力。;;;委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告。;礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。 ;Read this letter and imagine that you are the adviser who deals with students’ problems. Write a letter to give Xiao Li some helpful advice. ;Dear ___, Can you help me please? My best friend has just started smoking. I do not like it and I told her what I thought. She laughed at me and said that I was not grown-up enough.;Then she offered me a cigarette and I felt so embarrassed. I did not know how to refuse it. Please help me. I do not want to start smoking, but I do not want to lose my best friend, either. Yours sincerely, Li Xiaolei;;Dear ___________, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _______ (建议的主题), and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.;In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ____________ (建议的内容);I hope you will find these proposals ______, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to _____________. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming ;Your friend is ____________ smoking and your ________ towards this matter. ;I think it more important to ______ the smoker to use good judgment and to show ________ for others. ;You had better ______ his offer, and he will ___________ you at last.;巧列提纲，详略得当: 针对问题需要提出什么样的建议，要讲哪些内容，应该先列出提纲，并要做到内容重点突出、详略得当、井然有序，达到提纲挈领的作用。 ;Pointing out the harm of smoking. Showing your advice.;翻译要点，勾勒脉络: 列出提纲后，可以尝试着将文章中涉及到的建议要点或忠告翻译成相应的英语句子，这样全文的骨架就已经形成了。在此基础上，可增加合理的想象以及适当的扩展。;Smoking is _______ to your health, especially to your lung.;巧妙构思，浑然成篇: 增加适当的情节和???些过渡词将上述要点连接起来，加以适当润色，形成一篇地道、完整的英语建议信。 ;Medical scientists have expressed their concern about the effect of smoking on the ______ not only of those who are smoking but also of those who live in the air _________ by tobacco smoke. ;Smoking, which may be _________ for some people, is a s