好2008年广州1模考试基础写作讲评.ppt

总结广州一模作文中出现问题及对策;;须注意的要点; 2008年元月18日下午3点你校在学校礼堂举行了成人宣誓仪式。请以日记的方式记录仪式过程并谈谈自己的感想。（用5个规范的英语句子） ;英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。 日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、 所闻、所做或所想的事情。中、英文的日记三格 式大致一样。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的 日期、星期和天气的。 左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。 右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Windy, Snowy, Cloudy等。;2008年元月18日 星期…. 天气;　二、日记的要求;三、日记的类型和训练;March 12th, 2003, Tuesday Sunny (Fine) Today is Tree Planting Day. At 7:30 in the morning, all the students in our class met at the school gate. We walked to the park. Miss Gao and other teachers went and worked with us. All the students worked very hard, and we planted about 200 trees. Though we were dirty and tired, we still felt very happy.; 2008年元月18日下午3点你校在学校礼堂举行了成人宣誓仪式。请以日记的方式记录仪式过程并谈谈自己的感想。（用5个规范的英语句子） ;1. 2008年元月18日下午3点你校高三师生、全体学生家长在学校礼堂举行了成人宣誓仪式 “成长，责任” 2. 学生宣誓,学生代表发言（表达谢意，畅谈理想） ;3．教师和家长代表发言（表示祝贺，寄予希望 ) 4.我们一起观看各班学生表演节目 5.你自己的感想。 ;January 18th Friday Fine At 3:00 this afternoon, the teacher sand students in Senior Three as well as our parents attended the grown-up ceremony held in the school hall ,whose theme is “Growth and Responsibility”. First ,we made an oath ,and then a student ,representing all of us ,made a speech ,showing our thanks to not only our parents but also our teachers and talking about our great ideals .After that ,some teachers and parents offered us their congratulations and expressed their expectations for our future . Last ,we watched wonderful performances put on by students from different classes. The ceremony was over ,but it has made me well aware that I have grown up and I am supposed to shoulder the responsibility for our society.;审题;1 北京大学将要在七月初开办暑期汉语辅导班;1 A summer Chinese Course will he given by the Chinese Teaching Center of Peking University at the beginning of July . 2 classes are given 4 hours a day ,from Monday to Friday . 3 The course is suitable for learners of all levels ,from beginners to advanced learners .