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;优化句子的四种常用方法;优化句子的四种常用方法;此方法多用于介绍人物、事物或地点等。 [例1] 介绍事物(2008广东) 背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 Shooting, a means of survival originally, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ;[例2]介绍人物(2009广东) 时间: 上周末 对象: 眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题: 我国中小学生近视(eye-sightedness)问题 Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, concerning the issue of short-sightedness of the school children in China. ;[例3]介绍地点 姓名：李华 身份：育才中学学生 职位：学生会主席 校址：你们大学附近 I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university.;1.(翻译)李敏是个女孩子,今年18岁, 她在光华中学学习,她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友。;2.(整合)Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province. It is located in the middle of Guangdong Province. It is the culture and economy center of Guangdong Province.;3. (整合)Zhang Hai is male. He is 23 years old. He graduated from Hunan Normal University last year.;常用的并列连词有and, but, or, otherwise, nor, so, yet, however, for, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, either…or, neither…nor, (and) then, since等。;[例4]他不喜欢音乐，也不喜欢运动。 [一般] He doesn’t like music. He doesn’t like sports, either. [高级] He likes neither music nor sports.;[例5]我不喜欢他，他很自私。 [一般] I don’t like him. He is selfish. [高级] I don’t like him, for he is selfish.;4.He works hard himself. He encourages us to work hard, too.;5.These glasses are very expensive. Please be careful with them.;6.Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols. 48% of the boys favor sports stars. ;7.According to the professor, the cause of short-sightedness is very complicated. No medicine can cure it. ;8. I am good at expressing myself. I have the language advantage over others. ;[例6]我很惊讶，一切进展得那么顺利。 [一般] I was surprised. Everything went on very well. [高级] To my surprise, everything went on well.;[例7]她回到舞厅。她寻找丢失的项链。 [一般] She went back. She wanted to find her lost necklace. [高级] She went back to find her lost necklace.;[例8]故事是用简单的英语写的，很受英语初学者的欢迎。 [一般] The stories are written in simple English. They are popular with Engl