2014下期三第次月考写作讲评.pptx

—表格类作文;写作要求 1.只能用5个句子表达全部内容； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 Boys and girls， Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing. _____________________________________________________ That’s all.Thank you. ; 时间分配;一、审题 体裁（内容） ------ 时态 ------ 人称------ ;写作设计思路;如何整理信息？; ①要背诵范文， 这样可以运用英语思维进行模仿性写作； ②要多阅读英文文章， 这样可以吸收语言材料； ③要听英文广播， 这样可以提高听力水平； ④要学习语法， 这样可以正确表达； ⑤要多写日记， 这样可以在练中学； ⑥要多练习口语， 这样可以提高口头技能； ⑦要参考别人的作文， 这样可以取长补短。;二、整合信息。 ;1. 我经常背诵范文，使自己在模仿写作时用英语思维思考。 2. 我也喜欢广泛读英文文章使自己尽可能多的吸取语言材料。 3. 为使别人明白，我觉得多听英文广播，学习好语法和多说英语也很重要。 4. 我还坚持写日记，通过“写”这种方式来提高写作。 5. 我还经常参考他人的写作从中取长补短。;1、 ①背诵范文 ② 运用英语思维 ③进行模仿性写作 ;2、①多阅读英文文章 ② 吸取语言材料 ; ①多听英文广播 提高听力水平 3、 ②学习语法 正确表达 ③多练习口语 提高口头表达能力;4、①多写日记 ② 在做中学;5、①参考他人的习作 ②取长补短 ?; Boys and girls， Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing. ____________，I often recite good/beautiful English articles，which helps me think in English when I imitate English writing. _________ ，I also read English articles widely so that I can take in as many language materials as possible. Thirdly，in order to make myself understood，I think it is important to learn about some grammars，listen to the radio and practice speaking English a lot. _________，I keep a diary every day so that I can learn by writing. ________________，I often refer to others’ articles to know what I need and what I can learn from others. That’s all. Thank you.;【亮点说明】范文中运用到一些常见的短语in order to 为了；make myself understood,使自己被理解/明白；keep a diary记日记； listen to听； refer to查阅；Firstly, I often recite beautiful English articles, which help me think in English when I imitate English writing这个句子中运用非限制性定语从句。Thirdly, in order to express myself correctly / make myself understood, I think it is important to learn some grammar, listen to the radio and practice speaking English a lot.这个句子中运用到目的状语，it is adj to do sth 这个句型结构。Besides / In addition, I often refer to oth