2015南通2模作文指导.doc

2015 南通、连云港高三第二次调研考试作文指导 【审题】 时　态 一般现在时 人　称 结　构 描述图的内容→你对该图的理解→该图对你的启发 【信息】 第一小节：两位工人张贴风景画，避免窗外的污染 第二小节： 不可否认，这种自欺欺人的做法，不能从根本上解决污染带来的影响 随着时间的推移，情况只能越来越糟 丧失解决问题的最佳时机 总结：欺骗害己害人 第三小节： 我的看法是，要想有效地解决污染问题，我们需要努力，不搞欺骗 作为学生不弄虚作假,比如抄袭作业、考试作弊 点题：不要自欺欺人 【炼句】 从图中可以看出，两位工人正在张贴风景画，企图通过这种方式营造一个没有污染的工作环境 显然这种行为是一种欺骗行为。他们企图通过掩盖真相来解决问题。 但问题依然存在，得不到解决 随着时间推移，情况只能变得更加糟糕 还会丧失解决问题的最佳时机 结果害人害己 想有效地解决问题，我们必须尽力来达成目标，不能靠欺骗 作为学生，平时我们不能抄袭作业，考试不能作弊 坚决不能自欺欺人 【成篇】 As is shown vividly in the picture There is no denying that ... In my opinion, .. 【范文】 As is shown vividly in the picture, two workers are dealing with serious pollution outside by putting up some beautiful landscape paintings inside, intending to create and enjoy a pollution-free workplace. There is no denying that their action is a kind of trick. They try to get rid of a problem by covering it up, which is useless because the causes of the problem are still there. What’s worse, as time goes by, things will go from bad to worse , the chance to remove it lost.（ 此句还有高级的表达方式吗？）So it is harmful both to themselves and others. In my opinion, if we hope to settle any problem efficiently, we must make every effort to reach our goal instead of playing any trick. As students, we are not supposed to copy others’ homework, let alone cheat in exams to get good marks. As a saying goes, / A saying has it that never bury your head in the sand. (151 words)