英语写作第7讲高级词汇和较复杂结构的写作与训练.ppt

1．多实少虚 写作中多用specific words，少使用general words，多用蕴含感情色彩的词语，少用中性词。如good指人时可用以下形容词替换：kind, honest, generous, selfless, brave, warm-hearted, sympathetic, honorable, humorous, smart, gentle等；good指事物或事情时可用以下形容词替换：great, fantastic, splendid, marvelous, excellent, wonderful, meaningful, enjoyable, nice等。以下句子中的形容词虽然都可以用good代替，但远不如原句出彩。;学车问答 学车问题 开车问题 学车怎么办？驾校大全 中国驾校报名 考试 理论学习 地址 介绍英格驾考 / 驾考单机版软件车类小游戏 学车小游戏大全;2．短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us. →I can no longer the way he speaks to us. He what I said in the class. →He what I said in the class.;3．弃旧取新 写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学过的、较长的词汇。 We all the same chance. →We all the same chance (opportunity)． We have homework to do at the weekend. →We have homework to do at the weekend.;4．避免重复 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother watching football matches.;Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also a library where the old playground used to be. →Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also a library where the old playground used to be. ;二、使用较复杂结构 1．在一篇文章中要适当地改变语法结构来增加文章表达 方式的多样性。 (1)改变时态和语态 The bell is ringing now. →There goes the bell!;(2)使用名词性从句 It disappointed everybody that the player was badly injured in the first round. →The fact that the player was badly injured in the first round disappointed everybody. (3)使用较高级的状语从句 I wont believe what you say. →No matter what you say, I wont believe. ;(4)使用定语从句 The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written. →The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. (5)使用虚拟语气 You didnt take my advice, so you failed in the exam. →If you had taken my advice, you wouldnt have failed in the exam.;(6)