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PAGE  PAGE 4 写作讲义（五）-- 如何写有变化的句子 句子多样化实例： The goats grazed peacefully in the farm. They were unaware of the approaching hunter. The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列句) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+简单句) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列分句) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语短语) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (从句+主句) The young pilot was on his first overseas training. He felt very uneasy. The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy. The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training. The young pilots first overseas training made him feel very uneasy. Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training. The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy. It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy. The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy. When the young pilot was on his/first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy. 3）如今的年轻人对待偶像的态度 (崇拜偶像的狂热) 令人困惑（担忧）。 如何使句子多样化 用各种句式、巧用连词合并句子 有的学生在作文中使用过多简单句，成了简单句堆砌；有的写复杂句时，动辄用so， and，then，but，or，however，yet等非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的，反而使句子结构松散、呆板。为了避免这种现象，可以通过使用连接词，尤其是一些表示从属关系的连接词，如 who，which，that，because，since，although，after，as，before，when，whenever，if，unless，as if等，不仅能够丰富句型，而且还能够把思想表达得更清楚，意义更连贯。 改变句子开头 A．People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food． B．There is a great