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PAGE  2014年上海中考英语作文分析，及，范文 整体趋势 今年的 HYPERLINK /en/ 英语 作文this time next year，让考生谈一谈明年生活有什么变化，以及畅想对自己对他人的期望，并会做些什么。今年的考题一改之前的写建议、写方法、写感受，转向去引导学生畅想未来的记叙文，体裁上还是有些出乎意料的。但从内容来看，却又很在情理之中，中考完的学生马上要面临的就是高中的崭新生活，充满着挑战和变化。这样的命题更贴近学生当下，也能充分激发学生从多角度思考、多层次发挥。 细致分析 1. 单从题目着手，马上能确定应用的时态，以将来时，将来进行时为主。 2. 其次通过中文的一些说明可以确定文章的组织架构。 三段式中的首段可以先用一些形容词对明年的生活变化有一个概述。 其次body part 可根据题意详细分为以下层次：第一，从现在的生活着手重点谈几方面的变化，如生活上会接触很多新的朋友，新的老师；学习上会有更大的挑战，从被动学到自主学的学习方法的一些转变等。第二，在这样的变化下，对自己和他人的期望。第三，自己有一些什么样的打算，朝什么方向努力，具体的行动。 最后，点题并表达对未来生活的期许和愿景。 3. 想要拿到高分，语言的使用也是一个得分点。学生可以通过巧用过渡词，多变的句式以及名人名言来征服阅卷老师。 2014年上海中考英语范文 　　This Time Next Year 　　Its exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like. 　　At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will make a lot of new friends. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English. Also I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone. Life will be totally different, but Im really looking forward to it. 2014年上海中考英语范文 This Time Next Year Life is changeable, and thats why everyone longs for the future, which is full of challenge as well as hope. 　　Perhaps I will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. Despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in English. Basically, it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. Then, I will benefit from reading English books. What is more, going abroad is of great use in improving my oral English. Only in this way can I progress in English endlessly. 　　Make plans and go for what I want. And I believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.