2015上海中考英语作文+范文i want to invent.pdf

2015 上海中考英语作文 题目：i want to invent 范文 1 及点评： I want to invent a flying car It is not uncommon to meet traffic problems and serious air pollution in big city. It is a must to have a plan to improve the serious condition. I get an idea to design my own flying machine like a car which can drive well in the street as well as fly between the high rises to avoid the traffic jam. What’s more, when it is moving ,it can transform the motion energy into electricity to drive the engine. Thus, it is possible to save a lot of fuel and reduce the air pollution. It is of great use to solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution ,and even save the natural resource. Bright idea can only be achieved with the determination and courage. I believe my idea will turn a new leaf of future life. ——新东方优能中考英语左丽娜老师 精彩亮点分析： 亮点一：高分短语 亮点二：it is a must 活用高频词 亮点三：定语从句描述自己设计的汽车 亮点四：高分短语 亮点五：be of great use 名词结构更高端 亮点六：被动语态，丰富句式 亮点七： turn a new leaf of future life 翻开未来生活的新篇章 ------------------------------------- 范文 2 及点评： I want to invent a time machine As a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays, I would rather learn about the history and the future life of human being from a real experience than learn from a textbook. That’s why if I can work as a great inventor, inventing a time machine will be my first choice. The most important usage of my time machine will be visiting one of best schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education. Therefore, when I visit the school of the ancient city, I can not only try different ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as well. Using a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is