浅谈英文写作与投稿几点经验.pptVIP

1. 论文写作中易犯的错误 “删繁就简三秋树，标新立异二月花” 论文中的数据并非越多越好； 要以最精炼的语言和最精简的图片把问题说清楚；突出重点，突出新意； 自己都解释不清楚的公式、定理等等最好不要写上去，以免给审稿人留下把柄。 以最近Materials Letters接收的文章为例… 最初时： Title：“Biomimetic Fabrication of Hydroxyapatite Assisted with Bamboo Membrane” （无新意，不能吸引眼球） 8 figures, 19 equations, 26 pages 修改后： Title：“Fabrication of Flower-like Hydroxyapatite Agglomerates with the Assistant of Bamboo Membrane” 5 figures, no equations, 8 pages. “提纲法”非常有用 可以找几篇与自己想要撰写的文章相近的文献（最好是大牛写的），看看人家是怎么组织内容的，分别总结他们的写作提纲； 在此基础上理清思路，列出自己的提纲； 开始动手写作。 “站在巨人的肩膀上”来构思我们的论文。 The flower-like hydroxyapatite agglomerates formed on the upper side and lower side of an egg-shell membrane were investigated intensively through a unique designed crystallizer. Firstly the ion driving force was calculated in theory, and also the influences of various factors on the morphology and crystalline of the agglomerates such as temperature, pH value, and holding time were furthermore explored in detail. Via the SEM, FESEM, FETEM and XRD, it was clear that with higher temperature, larger pH value, and longer holding time the formation of flower-like hydroxyapatite agglomerates are produced with better crystalline, which is certain significance of the formation process of bone. The flower-like hydroxyapatite agglomerates formed on the upper side and lower side of an egg-shell membrane were intensively investigated through a unique designed crystallizer. Firstly the ion driving force was calculated in theory. In addition the influences of various factors, such as temperature, pH value, and holding time, on the morphology and crystallinity of the agglomerates, were studied in detail by means of FESEM, TEM and XRD. It was found that flower-like hydroxyapatite agglomerates with high crystallinity can be produced under higher temperature, larger pH value, and moderated holding time, which is significant to the formation process of bone. 多读欧美人写的文献，学习其写作方法，将好的句子记录下来，自己写文章时就可以用到；多积累，培养语感； 写作时尽量使用短的简单句，长难句往往让人看得很费劲，并容易留下把柄；多跟写作经验丰富的老师和