怎样提高英语写作方法.ppt

如何提高英语 写作技巧 沧源民族中学朱雪华 例题：阅读下文，注意划线部分。指出划线部分属于什么成分、起什么用？ Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether middle school students should make friends on line. Different people have different opinions. Some people say yes. They think that the internet helps make more friends. And chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions. Besides， they may even get help with their foreign language studies. Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time. And they should spend time more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line. It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can easily find it in our classmates and other people around us. 本篇文章使用了一些高级词汇(指运用恰当的形容词或副词等)如:recently, heated, even 等；运用了从句、非谓语动词、连词、介词短语等，使文章内容丰富，语言紧凑却很流畅。 1. 我正要出去，天突然下雨了。 普通句：I was about to go out，and it suddenly started to rain. 高级句：I was about to go out when it started to rain.（when＝at that time） 区别在于： 2. 当我走进教室的时候，听见学生朗读英语。 普通句：When I entered the classroom，I heard the students reading English. 高级句：Entering the classroom，I heard the students reading English. 区别在于： 3. 从山上看去，这个村庄样子更加漂亮了。 普通句：①When we see the village from the hill,the village looks much more beautiful. ②When it is seen from the hill，the village looks much beautiful. 高级句：Seen from the hill，the village looks much more beautiful. 区别在于： 4. 努力工作，你就会成功。 普通句：If you work hard，you will succeed. 高级句：Working hard，you will succeed. 区别在于： 5. 玛丽亚的妈妈直到上周末才从美国纽约来到北京。 普通句：Maria’s mother didn’t arrive in Beijing from New York of America until last weekend. 高级句：Not until last weekend did Maria’s mother arrive in Beijing from New York of America. 高级句：It was not until last weekend that Maria’s mother arrived in Beijing from New York of America. 区别在于： 6. 只有改变我们的生活方式，