正反对比写作讲解.ppt

1. fluency (语言）流利，流畅 2. clarity (思路）清晰，明确 3. coherence （上下文）呼应连贯 4.accuracy (用词）准确，精确 5.completeness （内容）完整 Dear Peter, I’ve been here for half a year, I’d like to tell you something about Beijing and London. In our country cars are driven on the left side of the road, but here on the right side. Many people go to work by car in London, while most people in Beijing go to work by bike. The climate in Beijing is better than ours, which is fine most of the time. But London has so many cloudy days. Workers in Beijing work five days a week just as those in London. Students here work hard at their lessons and a lot of people can speak English. It’s a pity that students in our country don’t make full use their time and few know Chinese. That’s all for today. Please write to me. yours, Alice 英语写作中常见错误 1 Disagreements 2 Misplaced Modifiers 3 Sentence Fragments 4 Dangling Modifiers 5 Misuse Parts of Speech 6 Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns 7 Run –on Sentence 8 Trouble in Diction 9 Redundancy 10 Incoherence 11.Comprehensive Misusage) 一． 不一致（Disagreements）所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致,　时态不一致及代词不一致等．例１． When one have money , he can do what he want to .(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么．)剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have改为：　Once one has money ,he can do what he wants 应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致． (to do) 二． 修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers）英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解．例１． I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.?????? 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末．　 三． 句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生．例１． There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .?????? 剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完