从简单句入手写好4级作文.ppt

从简单句入手写出好文章 大学生刚刚毕业就想立刻找到高薪的工作是不可能的。 It is impossible for sb. to do sth.. 在sb. 的位置填上“刚刚毕业的大学生”，在不定式的位置填上“找到高薪的工作”，如下所示：　　 It is impossible for刚刚毕业的大学生to找到高薪的工作. 定语从句，写成college students who have just graduated left； “高薪的”用定语从句，写成to find jobs which can give them a lot of money It is impossible for college students who have just graduated to find jobs which can give them a lot of money. 刚刚毕业的大学生： newly-graduated students, 高薪的工作： well-paying/paid jobs, It is impossible for newly-graduated students to find well-paying jobs， 把上面一句话拆分成为四句： ①每年，都有很多大学生毕业。 ①Every year, many college students graduate. ②他们都想找到工作。 ②They all want to find jobs. ③这些工作可以给他们很多钱。 ③These jobs can give them a lot of money. ④这是不可能的。 ④This is impossible. many改为heaps and heaps of (一批一批的)，这是换词； graduate　修饰状语： from universities； 独立的学院，and institutes。 第一句话变成： Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes. 第三句的主语是第二句最后jobs的重复，可以用定语从句连接起来所以②＋③成为： They all want to find jobs，which can give them a lot of money. Give　　offer， a lot of money　　handsome salaries。 插入语：they hope， They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries. 第四句话也可以和前两句连在一起，采用并列句，用but连接，而impossible太绝对了，改为hardly possible， They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries，but this is hardly possible. 大学生刚刚毕业就想立刻找到高薪的工作是不可能的。 Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes. They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries，but this is hardly possible. 英文句子写作思路 主语（名词）　再想谓语　（助动词、情态动词、系动词）动词　（及物动词还是不及物动词）　及物动词就要考虑跟宾语，不及物动词可能要有状语。 国际旅游业创造了很多就业机会。 International tourism creates many job opportunities. 外出工作让母亲们没法照顾好孩子。 Working outside makes women unable to take good care of their children. Working outside makes it impossible for women to take good care of their children. Working outside deprives women of the chance to take good care of their children. * *