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看图作文 高考作文评分细目 1.对内容的要求 全面 2.对句式的要求 多样 3.对词汇的要求 丰富 4.对语篇的要求 流畅，顺畅的连接和转折 5.对书写的要求 正确，工整 6.对目的的要求 符合写作要求 例文1 1. 下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。 注意：①短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整； ②只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； ③参考词汇：货摊stand (n.);抢夺 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.) 内容要点： 1.公园，冰淇淋货摊旁 ,年轻妇女的包被抢 2.人们追赶抢包者 , 3.长排椅上坐着一位老人,抢包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒, 4．两名警察逮捕抢劫者 , 5．妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智 ①One Sunday morning, there were some people in Zhongshan Park, where a woman was buying an ice-cream ,when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. ②Seeing this, a few people began to run after the snatcher. ③As the young man was running past an old man, who was sitting quietly on a bench nearby, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatcher’s legs. ④The young man fell down on the ground hard and two policemen came and arrested him. ⑤The woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness. 例文2 [写作内容] 请就图画的内容，写一篇短文，包括： 1. 简要叙述下面这幅图片的内容； 2. 结合图片和社会实际恰当议论，如对独生子女溺爱，包办一切，期望他们成绩优秀； 3. 谈谈你的看法； 4.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 The Eager hope of the Parents ①In the picture, the boy who scored 80 in his exam is being scolded by his mother, because she doesn’t think his score is so good. ②As we all know, each family is encouraged to have only one child in China. ③On one hand, parents take care of every thing for them; on the other hand, they expect them to get good marks at school. ④Some of them are pushed so hard that they even lose interest in their lessons. ⑤In my opinion, children should be encouraged to study instead of just being forced to do that, and at the same time, I also hope all parents can understand their children and let them fly by themselves. How to write a picture story 1.认真审题。 首先要看题头的汉语要求或提示，通常包括： (1)审文体。如是要求写说明文还是记叙文。 (2)审时态。如若是写日记用过去时。 (3)审人称。(4)审要求。 2. 看懂图意。 把图片展示的时间、地点、人物、事件等有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯完整的故事或事件。注意：文字说明和参考词汇对我们理解图画的意思非常有用。 3. 组织要点。在看懂图画的基础上，最好在草稿纸上逐条列出要点, 以免遗漏。若是几幅图，要列出各图