1月月考情景作文(成人礼).pptx

1月月考情景作文讲评;存在的问题：;假设你是李华，上周六参加了学校为高三学生举行的成人仪式。请根据以下四幅图的顺序，向你的美国朋友Tom介绍整个活动过程，并谈谈自己的感受。注意：1. 词数不少于60。2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。参考词汇：宣誓swear an oath;;;;;;;Sample 1;Then two students, representing us, expressed our gratitude and determination to take on responsibilities. The most moving moment came when we were given the letters from parents. Tears rolled down my face as I read, recalling each memorable moment in my life and feeling the ever-lasting love from my parents. At the end of the ceremony, all of us swore an oath, promising to try our best, not only for ourselves as adults, but also for our families and our society.;The Coming-of-Age ceremony, for me, is more than a ceremony; it is an instructive lesson. That’s what we did on this special occasion. Do you have similar events in the USA? Please let me know if you do. Yours, Li Hua;语料库： 图1： 1)穿着正装，我们聚集在礼堂参加成人礼。 Dressed formally, we senior three students (together with the teachers and some parents) gathered at the hall to attend the coming of age ceremony. 2)台上坐着我们可亲的/受人尊敬的老师和一些家长。 On the stage sat our beloved (respected/respectable) teachers and some parents. (respectful: polite);图2： 1)开始，校长和一位家长恭贺我们并们表达祝福。我们感动到了他们的爱和期望。 At the beginning, our headmaster and a parent delivered to us their congratulations and best wishes. We felt both their love and expectations. 2)然后两个学生代表我们表达感激和承担责任的决心。 Then two students, representing us, expressed our gratitude and determination to take on responsibilities.;图3： 1)过渡句：最激动的时刻是读家长的信。The most moving moment came when we were given the letters from parents. 2)(读信时)我落泪了。 Tears rolled down my face as I read. Tears filled my eyes. I burst into tears. (burst-burst-burst) I couldn’t help but shed tears/ I couldn’t help shedding. ;图4： 1)过渡词：在仪式最后 At the end of the ceremony 2)宣誓成为合格公民，为社会奉献，服务于国家。 We swore that we would become qualified c