2011广一模英语大作文佳作赏析及点评.ppt

2011广一模美句美文欣赏与朗读 信息点整合条理清晰，首句开门见山, 简洁明了，重点突出。交待题目要点“存在问题：目前城市交通拥堵、污染严重”并且“进行‘治堵方案大家谈’的讨论”。 The English forum of our school had a discussion about the problems of traffic jams and severe pollution in our city. 用词准确，搭配得当，句型多样，连贯流畅。如： In order to solve these problems, the forum put forward several solutions, one of which is that people should drive private cars less often and carry as many people as possible in each car. (使用了不定式以及非限制性定语从句) What’s more, the government is supposed to develop/ improve the public transportation systems more efficiently to provide more convenience for citizens. Generally speaking, these solutions are not only economical and time-saving, but also energy-saving and environmentally friendly. (使用了not only … but also … 连接四个并列的信息点) These measures are meaningful/ beneficial because not only can they help save time, money and energy but also they are environmentally friendly. Our school English forum had a discussion on how to deal with traffic jams and serious pollution in the cities. To solve the problems, people advise that citizens should drive private cars less often and try to share a car with others. What’s more, it is suggested that the public transportation system should be improved by the government, which will make it more convenient for citizens to go out. Some people also hope that green lanes should be built to encourage people to ride bicycles instead of driving cars. In conclusion, not only can these solutions help save money, time and energy but also they will be environmentally friendly/ do good to the environment. 2011广一模大作文： “诚信的重要性” 写作要求: 1. 你读后的感受； 2.以你或他人的经历说明； 3. 谈谈你从中悟出的道理。 In his speech, Li Hua referred to an overseas Chinese student in Germany, who couldn’t find a job because of his dishonesty. She tells people honesty is the best policy. *In his speech, Li Hua illustrates that honesty is the best policy by taking for example an overseas Chinese student in Germany who couldn’t find a job bec