英语作文点评.ppt

作文评讲 1、审清题意（人称、时态、词数、文体格式） 2、分析要点，划分段落（Introduction—Main body --- Conclusion) 3、用英文列出要点，加强句式的改写(so…that; it+adj’ to do sth. ; not only … but also ; because/ so ; although/but;if/unless/ when引导的状语从句） 4、确立每个段落开头的主题句。然后在确当的上下文中间插入连接上下文的词：What’s more, at the same time, as a result , what’s worse. On the other hand ,in addition , in my opinion …) 5、规范誊写作文（最好无涂改）。 评分标准 第一档.?内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，有复杂句三句且上下文顺畅，书写规范，给17-20分； 第二档.?内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，语言较平实，书写较规范，给13-16分； 第三档.?内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给8-12分； 第四档.?只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给一些同情分 Some students think it’s good for animals to keep them in zoos. First, people can get a closer look at wild animals. Second, they believe that it helps people love animals and nature. At the same time, zoos can provide homes for endangered animals., as a result, zoos can keep them safe from danger. Some students are against it ., for they think it’s a waste of money and labour to keep animals in zoos and the ecological balance will be broken. What’s worse , the animals can’t move freely in nature. In my opinion, we can save endangered animals only if we save their natural habitats. Therefore, I suggest protecting animals natural habitats and return them to nature one day . 中考英语写作评分标准 How to write a good composition Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach in our school three years ago. He gets along well with us. He is strict with us. He has worked hard over the years. He has helped a lot in English. We have improved our spoken English a lot. We are grateful to him. He will leave for Australia next week. Wish him a pleasant journey. Of course , I have to find a good hetel and deal with other problems on my own . So, I prefer to join packing tours. I think my trip to Beijing will be comfortable and happy Before the campaign, we used to be late for school and failed to hand in our homework in time. In addition, we seldom greeted our teachers and after class it was common for us to make a lot of noise.