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作文讲评 Those who can’t learn from history are doomed to repeat it. Step1. Learn from your peers. Step2 积累Less is more. 归纳：写人必备闪亮词汇： 被视为/被誉为 被提名为 因…而出名 因…受…的欢迎 出色的，杰出的，非凡的，出类拔萃的 聪明的 关注… 出名的，闻名的 与…相处融洽，与相处和谐 对…有天分 精通，擅长 对…感兴趣 对…很狂热 偏爱… 担心…Step3 小试牛刀Practice makes perfect. 你校将在假期组织部分学生赴英国学习。作为该项目的负责人，你需负责将两位赴英学生的情况介绍给英方家庭。 ［写作内容］请根据以下表格内容，写信给英方家庭介绍这两位学生的情况。信的开头和结尾已给出。 姓名 李华 陈伟 特点 开朗、乐观 待人友善、有点害羞 爱好 体育活动、阅读、听音乐 与李华一样 担心的问题 饮食不习惯 沟通困难 期望 多了解英国的历史文化 多交朋友，提高英语水平 Dear Mr. Mrs. Smith, Thank you for your offer to host two of our students. The boys’ names are Li Hua and Chen Wei. Here is a little bit about them. …? … Once again thank you for your generosity. ? Sincerely Yours, Secretary of the project ?［写作要求］ ?只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 ［评分标准］ 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 Sample: Li Hua is an open-minded and optimistic boy while Chen Wei is friendly but a little shy. Despite their different characters, they both are passionate about sports, reading as well as listening to music. Li Hua shows more concern about food, thinking that he may not get accustomed whereas Chen Wei is worried about some possible difficulties in communicating with others. As for their expectations, Li Hua is eager to have a deeper understanding of history and culture in the UK. Chen Wei has a strong desire to make more friends and improve his English. 基础写作（2011佛山一模） 假设你是李华。最近，你的英国笔友Mike来信说他参军了。同时，他向你了解有关在中国参军的要求以及你对参军的想法。请根据以下内容给Mike写一封回信。 [写作内容] 入伍条件： 1. 年龄18—20岁 2. 身体健康 3. 身高：男, 1.62米以上；女, 1.60米以上 你的想法： 1. 自小崇拜军人，渴望尽早参军。2. 参军可以保卫祖国，丰富人生经历。 3. 相信自己会喜欢部队生活，成为一名优秀的战士。 [写作要求] 1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不包含在5个句子中； Dear Mike, ??? I’m glad to know that you have joined the British Army. Congratulations! ??? In China, if you want to join the army, you must be between 18 and 20 years old and in good health. Besides, males should be over 162 cm tall and females over 160 cm. As for me, having been admiring/worshipping soldiers very much since I was a child, I have a burning desire to join the army as soon as possib