Heroes电子课件3.pptVIP

* * Can you tell a story in English? Leading in Can you write this story down in correct words and sentences? What are your problems in writing a story? Today let’s learn how to write a story! 【写作任务与要求】 能按照叙述文的结构写一篇故事。 注意： 1. 交代清楚记叙文6要素 （when/where/who/what/why/how)； 2. 写清楚事情的起因、经过、结果。 3. 连接词的正确使用； GUIDED WRITING Linking (sequence) before , when, as soon as, firstly, first of all, after that, during, later, then, next, finally, in the end Stage 1 题材分析 什么是故事？ 故事其实就是记叙文，是以叙述人物 或事情发展变化过程为主的一种文体。 自己经历或他人经历 第一人称或第三人称 常用过去时态 记叙文六要素 1.Decided who is the hero/heroine of your story and what he/she was doing before the action started; Stage2 2. Draw a timeline of the main events: e.g. A friend( Daisy) was taking her dog for a walk near a river. Taking dog for a walk See children playing on bridge Boy falls in river Daisy dives into Dog help them out Example: Stage 3 Layout : 1)Introduction Say why, when and where the thing took place. Say who was there 2) The beginning Describe the preparations 3) Development Describe suddenly what happened 4) Conclusion Describe the end of story and your feelings. 一天早上我和我的朋友去公园散步。 One morning my friend and I went for walking in a park. 2. 一辆失控的汽车突然经过我们。 Suddenly, a car drove past us out of control. 3. 当我跑向燃烧的汽车时，我看到3个人困在车内。 When I ran to the burning car, I saw three people trapped inside. 4. 司机失去意识地坐在车里面。 The driver was sitting inside, unconscious. 5. 我不得不爬进前边的窗户救她。 I had to climb into the front window to save her. Please writing a story about helping people or doing some good things in your past experience. （about 50 words） Sample writing One morning I went for walking with my friend Tom in a park. Suddenly, a car drove past us out of control. The car crashed and after that it burst into flames. First we ran to the burning car. When we got there, we saw three people trapped inside. They were screaming and we knew we had to get them out. It was incredibly hot as we opened the doors. The dri