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英语专业四级考试在线课堂 3.句式多样，复杂得体。 5）这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房；卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。 A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well. B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 语言丰富性——结构造句与众不同 英语专业四级考试在线课堂 1. 语气得体 避免俚语、陈腔滥调和非正式用字 例：Brian’s mother reprimanded him for blowing his physics test. Improved: Brian’s mother reprimanded him for failing his physics test. 除非必要，避免使用第一人称：如“我/我的” 例：I think we should protect the planet—home of everyone. Improved: We should protect the planet—home of everyone. 避免太多学术性强的语言 例：Close-support, transport, and reconnaissance assistance is provided by the S-3X helicopter, which is the most cost-effective in a crane configuration. Improved: The S-3X helicopter provides support, transportation, and reconnaissance. However, the helicopter is most cost-effective when it works as a crane. 语言得体性——语气得体，避免Chinglish 英语专业四级考试在线课堂 2. 语言地道 借助报刊阅读，扩展常用词汇 Better City， Better Life 城市让生活更美好 to teach fish to swim 班门弄斧 up the tree 骑虎难下 探索语言内涵，培养跨文化意识 Eg. American beauty 带刺的美人 a bed of roses 称心如意之境遇 a social butterfly 交际花 重视朗读，增强语感 Writing naturally. Read it aloud. Does it sound natural? Does it flow? 语言得体性——语气得体，避免Chinglish 英语专业四级考试在线课堂 修辞，即调整、修饰文字词句，是写作、说话的一门艺术，对写作者的语言掌握有较高的要求。 常见的修辞手段有如下几种 A. 明喻（Simile） He looked as if he had just stepped out of my book of fairytales and had passed me like a spirit. It has long leaves that sway in the wind like slim fingers reaching to touch something. B. 暗喻（Metaphor） German guns and German planes rained down bombs, shells and bullets... Time is a river, of which memory is the water. Oh my friend, what I scoop up from the river is all yearning of you. 文笔优美——巧用修辞 英语专业四级考试在线课堂 C. 拟人（Personification） My only worry was that January would find me hunting for a job again. This time fate