2008年高考北京卷作文阅卷分析及不同档次作文展示(高考作文阅卷老师提供).ppt

2008年高考情景作文 阅卷评分标准 Last week, we hold a class meeting to discuss if we should have a spring outing. Since we have already in grade three, all of us agreed that we need one to relax ourselves. Then, we talked excitingly about where we would go. Somebody said he’d like to an amusement part, some people preferred paddling on a lack, and I suggested to climb a hill and have a picnic. Finally, I convinced the others. On a sunny day, we set out to Xiang Shan Park. There are colourful flowers, soft green grass all along the road to the top of the hill. So we had a really wonderful walking experience. But once we reach the top we were shocked by the terrible environment. Plastic bags, bottles, papers and other things spreaded everywhere! That time we had no excitement but angry and disappointment in heart. So we decide to clean up the whole hill. We picked up every litter and separated them in “can recycle” and “can’t recycle”. Then, we threw them into particular bin. Although we didn’t have a picnic as we wish. But we had a quiet meaningful day! But once we reach the top we were shocked by the terrible environment. Plastic bags, bottles, papers and other things spreaded everywhere! That time we had no excitement but angry and disappointment in heart. So we decide to clean up the whole hill. We picked up every litter and separated them in “can recycle” and “can’t recycle”. Then, we threw them into particular bin. Although we didn’t have a picnic as we wish. But we had a quiet meaningful day! Greatly comes the spring. As the wind softly blows, it brings back the vitality to the great outdoor. Students in our class were excited, too, and eager to have a spring outing in the weekend last week. A heated discussion was held. Some students suggested we go boating, some insisted that going hiking was the best idea, while some thought the amusement park was of more fun. Finally, we decided to go hiking in the mountains on a sunny day. The flowers were blooming hap