【课堂新坐标】2013-2014学年高中英语 Unit3 Period Ⅳ task Project教学课件 牛津译林版选修8.ppt

如何写参观报告 参观报告类的作文要求作者把参观的整个过程都完整地叙述出来，并侧重对参观过程的所见所闻进行详细描述。一般来说，既然是参观的报告，肯定是已经发生了的事情，所以作文的主体时态应该是一般过去时态。参观报告在结构上一般分为三个部分：开头、主体和结尾。开头一般是开门见山，叙述自己的参观地；主体则是详细描述参观中的所见所闻；结尾则是表达对本次参观的心得体会。 1．参观报告类作文的结构 参观报告类的作文一般采取“三段式结构”： 首段：简要说明参观的总体情况：参观的目的地、参观的时间、所见所闻。 中段：对整个参观的过程进行详细的描述，特别需要注意的是：(1)要以恰当合理的顺序把所看到的景物等表述出来。(2)既要描述所见还要有所感想。 末段：对这次的参观作整体的评价。 2．参观报告类的语言 (1)参观中的所见所闻都是自己亲身经历的，所以叙述中的语言应该准确，不能出现一些似是而非的描述，如：...likely to..., probably, maybe, perhaps, it seemed that..., in my opinion等，尽量使用一些让读者清楚明了的语言，如：as we can see, it is obvious that..., I clearly saw...等。 (2)参观中的所见所闻很多，风景、人物等可能较为繁琐。怎样把参观过程的所有事情组织得井井有条是非常重要的。通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin with, then, later等依次描述参观中的所见所闻。 (3)既然是参观报告，那就主要是讲述以前参观过的地方，所以时态上主要是使用一般过去时态。 根据下面的要点，写出参观上海的所见所闻和所感。 1．我和父母去了上海，很多漂亮的建筑给我留下了深刻的印象。 2．我们先去了美丽的黄浦江，又去了繁忙的南京路，并在那儿享受了购物的乐趣，最后我们去了博物馆并观看了一场有趣的科幻电影。 3．这次去上海的参观很好。 [思路分析] 第一段：交代参观的地点、时间、人物以及对参观地的总体印象。 第二段：详细介绍参观的地点。 第三段：概括总结本次参观感受。 [句式温习]　 1．有一些漂亮的建筑物，给我留下了深刻的印象。 There are some beautiful buildings, very much. 2．我从来没见过如此美丽的风景。 I seen so beautiful views. 3．我购物购得很开心。 I going shopping. 4．我将不会忘记这次难忘的经历。 I will never . 【答案】　1.which impressed me　2.Never had　3.had great fun　4.forget the unforgettable experience 【参考范文】　 Last weekend, I went to Shanghai with my parents. Shanghai is a big city. There are some beautiful buildings, which impressed me very much. Firstly, I went to the Huangpu River. It was long and some seagulls were resting on the surface of the sea. Never had I seen so beautiful views. After that, we went to Nanjing Road, which was very busy and crowded. We went shopping. The stores were great but goods were really expensive. I had great fun going shopping. At last, I visited the museum. It was cool and big. I saw an interesting science fiction movie. It was great. I love Shanghai. I enjoyed my visit very much. I will never forget the unforgettable experience. 强调句的结构：It is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋其余部分。 It was my elder sister who/that first ha