初中英语作文写作指导.ppt

英语写作指导 中考作文命题方向 1、近年来中考作文题目： 03年：To be a lovely Shanghainese 04年：Leaving school 05年：Growing pains and gains 06年：I have a dream 07年：Things I hate to do 1)贴近学生生活（使得考生有话可写） 2)有时代感 3）写作手法夹叙夹议，着重写自己感受，纯粹议论和记叙不多见 家庭生活作文题材 第一类:（以下题材应以记叙为主） My mother(father)（写人） My flat(neighbourhood)（写地方） My favourite present(写物） A birthday party/ A trip to…(写事情） 第二类:（以下题材应夹叙夹议，着重写自己感受） My family life My thanks to my mother(my father) 第三类（以下题材应以议论为主） How to spend pocket money The importance of breakfast The advantages of doing housework 学校生活作文题材 第一类: My teacher(friend, classmate) My school 第二类: My hobby/My My dream/My school life 第三类: My view on exams The advantages of after-school activities Homework/Sports/Reading Is it necessary to wear school uniforms My good (bad) study habits 第四类: A football match/An interesting lesson 社会热点话题 The Olympics and I (2008 and I ) Being a lovely Shanghainese for the World Expo in 2010 My view on online games Mobile phones at school It’s easy to be green Is a family teacher necessary Is it necessary to have a net-pal 学生作文失分原因分析 -----内容： 1）偏题甚至离题如: Friend—My friend My family life—My family 2）素材(例子)问题 A: 没有典型性,不切合题目 B: 缺乏说服力,难以支持个人的观点 3) 意思重复、文章思路混乱缺乏层次感 语法----- 1）名词的单复数前后不统一 Exams are necessary because it helps improve ourselves in many ways. 2）时态、语态、主谓不一致 Having family teachers are very common among students. 3）副词位置或选用不当 We also can do something for our parents to show our thanks . 4)表达随意,中国式英语比比皆是 There are a large number of tourists visit Shanghai every year. 5）语言表达繁琐或生硬 I’ll try my best to study hard. I want to get good marks. (建议用in order to 连接) To buy things on line makes our life more convenient.(用Shopping on line) Endless homework lets me have little time to do things I like. ----Endless homework always keeps me too busy to do things I like. ----I have little time to do things I like because of endless homework. 写话常见体裁 初中阶段的