雅思OG写作Test5 Task1解析.docx

智课网IELTS备考资料 雅思OG写作Test5 Task1解析 摘要： 雅思写作复习备考资料有很多，但是真正对大家有用的并不多，建议大家手中备有一份雅思OG写作资料，相信对提高雅思写作成绩会有帮助的，一起看看雅思OG写作Test5 Task1解析。  小马 过河为考生做了 雅思 OG写作Test5 Task1的解析：  雅思OG写作审题要领(Task focus) W R I T I NG  这篇小作文由两个饼状图(pie chart)组成。题目显示了 2003 年和 2013 年,新西兰网络营销产品所占 比例的变化。考生需要提取并总结主要信息,同时做出相关对比。从图表信息我们可以看到,比较的零售 产品内容为旅行、电影或音乐、书籍以及服装。图一中占比例较大的两个产品为旅游和服装;图二中占比 例较大的是电影或音乐以及旅行。  雅思OG写作写作思路(Thinking before writing)  考生需要在 150 字之内对图表里的信息进行概括,有侧重的描写主要特征,必要时选择适当省略。我们 要特别注意两张饼图中突出的以及变化的信息。比较突出的信息是:在 2003 年,旅行消费所占的比例最 大,其他三项比较平均,但书籍最少;到了 2013 年,电影音乐占的比例最大,其次是旅行,服装占比最 少。变化的信息是:从 2003 到 2013 年,电影音乐和书籍两项占比增加,而旅行和服装占比缩小。根据 所获得的信息,范文按照变化信息,将占比变化最大的两项旅行和电影音乐归为一段,再将所占比例变化 较小的两项书籍和服装归为一段,分别进行比较描写。这是比较理想的行文方式。  雅思OG写作范文演示(Sample analysis)  The two pie charts compare the percentages of online sales across different retail sectors in New Zealand in the years 2003 and 2013. For three of the sectors, it is evident that over this time frame there was significant change in their proportion of online transactions.  At 36% we can see that the travel sector accounted for the majority of online sales in 2003, but this percentage had dropped to 29% by 2013. Across the same ten-year period, as an increasing number of people chose to purchase films and music online, we can see that transactions went from just 21% to 33%, making it the retail sector with the highest overall share of the online market.  In 2003, the clothing industry boasted an impressive 24% of total online sales in New Zealand. However, by 2013, the figure had fallen considerably to 16%. Interestingly, online sales of books eventually overtook sales of clothes, although books still represented only 22% of the market. (162 words)  雅思OG写作范文亮点(Sample highlights)  第 1 段:改写原题  第一段通常为题目的改写或提炼,在范文中,题目信息被提取为 compare the percentages of online sales across different retail sectors. 这里的“compare the percentages”和“across different retail sectors”用得很好。紧接着强