高中英语写作教程-记叙文.ppt

* 教师：梁德义 ◆ List the points of the composition ◆ Translate the points into English ◆ Organise the points to an essay Three-step Writing Composition 假设下面六幅图画描述的是你的一段亲身经 历。请你根据画面所示内容，用英语写一篇100字左右的日记。(日记的开头已写好) ? 今天下午我去看电影. 在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来. 我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了. 于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主. 我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他. 失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了. 我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费. 今天下午我去看电影. 在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来. I went to the cinema this afternoon. I went to see a film this afternoon. On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a man’s bike. 我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了. I picked up the case and shouted at the man, but he had already rode away. 于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主. I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man. 我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他. I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him. 失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了. The man was very grateful and took out some money to thank me, but I refused. 我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费. I went back to the cinema by taxi. The driver was very moved and didn’t accept my money. 1. 举例、举例 for example、such as、 namely、 first、 second …、 finally 2. 总结归纳、发表意见 in a word、in short、 in one’s opinion、 personally、 to one’s surprise 3. 句与句之间的连贯 what’s more、 besides、 and、 then 、 so---- that 4. 转折 however、 while、 on the contrary 5. 因果 therefore、 thus、 as a result、 so May 3rd, Friday Fine One afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted at the man . But he didnt hear me and rode away. What should I do? Then I had an idea. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused . Then the driver took me to the cinema. When I paid him, the driver wouldn’t accept the money .He said he was very moved at what I did. 一. 合并为简单句 把其中一句改为分词短语 把其中一句改为介词短语 二. 合并